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punchyninja — native drums issue2 done
Published: 2009-08-07 08:35:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 4458; Favourites: 129; Downloads: 316
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well I think its done. I had a couple different versions, but I think this is what I'm gonna go with.....Related content
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Wait... where can I buy this?!
Or at least read more of it???
I love her design, both colors and style of the pages, and she just makes me want to know more!
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just set up a store!
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ooooh. soon, It just went to the printer and should be up on indyplanet soonish. I'll be at wondercon, fanime and san diego too! woot!
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this is very well rendered but i feel like this is kinda text heavy. You may need two even three panels for this discussion. long discussions can be tricky during travel. Normally they are ok when the characters are taking a boat or a plane and the speech bubbles actually come out of the vehicle. by just seeing the vehicle readers know this discussion took a long time. But when on foot you have to create the illusion that it is taking a while to get to the destination. dialogue is a great way to show the passing of time and when it is split up there is no doubt that the characters have traveled some amount of distance. I love the painted feel of this it is a nicely done page and also bear in mind that speech balloons cover a lot of the beauty. if the text were spread out this would be one gorgeous looking comic page hell yeah.
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really good crit, probably the best I've got on DA. thanks dude!
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I like how she has a skin-tight armored suit and a pretty scarf.
---AK
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its all about the scarf
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I hate to critique the final version like this, but i think her belt buckle is too bright/clean.
Now onto mandatory fan brown-nosing:
Thanks for posting all the WIPs for this during the week, it was tons of fun watching the different stages of your comic XD
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ooooh. good feedback. I'll have to tone that down. I think its the contrast of the the belt. hmmmm
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thanks! I'm gonna need it!!
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Turned out amazing! Well done.
Thank you very much for sharing it with us.
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I think the sharing is what keeps me going on the thing.
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Well, I am digging it, so keep it up!
When you do a collected/printed book for Native Drums, I am all over it!
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gorgeous outlines and colouring, my only gripe is that thy both don't look like they belong in the same world,one is cartoony while the other is rendered in a realistic style. Or perhaps you're doing this on purpose, in which case my apologies. fantastic work nontheless
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thats something I struggle with, sort of a shifting in my stlye. it toggles between an anime cartoon thing and an american comics look. gotta work on that some more.
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