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final pencils with block in color.edit: finished color version now. woot! on to the last freakin page. geesh!
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Great job. I'm really enjoying your work and I love off roading in the desert. That's a great trophy truck. You might get a bit more action out of it, though, if you turned the front wheels slightly. You have some decent body roll happening but turning the wheels so they aren't all parallel might give it a bit more action.
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thanks for the suggestion! Might have to try that for the next issue.
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PS That sounded wrong: you did a great job on the whole series.
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Wow, love those wheels! You did a great job on that
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...like that ride! ...under your pencil sketch, someone said you need a space between 'sun' and 'sets' [two words]... i guess you'll fix that. jeez, will we ever stop editing?
is hunter asking about group b or making a statement?
i can't recall if she already 
(sorry. 
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its nice having the extra editing eyes on the book.
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What can I say, I'm a born editor. But it's always easier to spot things in other people's work.
(I had to go back and change things in my last story five times after I posted it, within 5 minutes. Couldn't find them before the upload, oh no.)
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armchair-editing is simpler indeed. i write a lot too and constantly find many errors in my own work moments later.
okay, sometimes even after some damn thing's published. 
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It's familiarity with the material. As you read, you're reminded of what you WANTED to write, and sometimes you see that, and gloss over the errors. That's why it's easier to edit other people's stuff.
Changing the format is one way to break that up (like posting to DA), another trick is reading out loud, or reading backwards.
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217resaum, do ya' make bets? wanna' bet how long i been writin' an' editin' stuff? *-> 
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Oooh - the colors are looking promising, and the "CG" there on the bottom panels looks good! (Not disruptive to your style at all)
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thanks! I think I'm going to go back and redo some of the other "CG" in the book to match...
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Heh heh - rock some of that consistency! 
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does it have power steering? not that superhuman strength requires such things.
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man the rough version is on my commodore now but this updated versin is neato too i kind if liked the other ones grittyness
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What she didnt steal a car with rocket launchers and flame throwers on it?
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Oh yes thats the issue where she fights tons of
guys wearing only a bikini as well
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