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Published: 2012-08-14 13:02:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 942; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 14
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Ticking ClockworkBlades are red
Innocents bled
Justice doesn't exist
Repeated of dying
Revealing of fighting
The beast will find us soon
Twenty times more
My conscience is sore
Why must the torture go on?
Friends of my past
Caught in a cast
Lost and unknown of their fate
This place is not pure
But hell of no cure
Rules don't apply here at all
Working hard to no end
My heart will not mend
The clock will turn back once more
Even the powerful fall
Leaving me to it all
Fate claiming her victims again
Bodies are falling
My mind is reminding
That a ticking sound can be heard
-Momo-chan (8/14/2012)
some parts dont make sense but thats how i put it together... it flowed better in my mind >.<
ummm i got bored this morning after pulling a 48 hour to catch up on stuff so i made a hetaoni poem~ >w< it took me 30 minutes so it might suck...
programs used~
photoshop
openoffice
brushes~
grunge - steven snell
clock - dead-brushes
blood splatter - ???
ah...i think its good i think~ this is my first poem i have ever made since...april...
eh, oh well
ciao~
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Comments: 29
PianoOni [2013-03-28 20:23:37 +0000 UTC]
That is so cool.. ;3; -finally have inspiration for her fangame for hetaoni again-
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punkfairy101 In reply to PianoOni [2013-03-29 16:39:55 +0000 UTC]
Thankies...? ;A; and yay~! Sounds cool~!
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Koneko-Hiruka [2012-08-17 02:24:21 +0000 UTC]
This is very good though the line "But hell of no cure" might sound and flow better with "But hell has no cure". Otherwise, it is amazing for the time spent.
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punkfairy101 In reply to Koneko-Hiruka [2012-08-17 02:28:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ^^ For both the advice and the compliment I'll take that into account since it does sound a bit better ^^
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Koneko-Hiruka In reply to punkfairy101 [2012-08-17 02:33:05 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. I'm glad I was able to help.
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punkfairy101 In reply to xXotakugirlXx [2012-08-15 04:44:34 +0000 UTC]
Awww D: Don't cry~! And thankies~!
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punkfairy101 In reply to MarcXangArt [2012-08-16 12:30:53 +0000 UTC]
it seemed like the text i should use since the others didnt really fit the poem...
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MsAmiClassified [2012-08-15 04:13:13 +0000 UTC]
That I was listening to this [link] straight off the soundtrack for the playable version (where it's appropriately titled 'Hopelessness') sure helped the mood
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punkfairy101 In reply to MsAmiClassified [2012-08-15 04:35:48 +0000 UTC]
Awww I'm sorry I cried now while listening to it and reading my poem again...
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MsAmiClassified In reply to punkfairy101 [2012-08-15 16:26:16 +0000 UTC]
*cries with you*
(I doubt we're the only ones)
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punkfairy101 In reply to MsAmiClassified [2012-08-15 16:57:39 +0000 UTC]
(sad to say it, but i think your right xD)
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