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Published: 2008-09-14 04:00:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Lineart for fresh. Please give me crits so I can fix up :B[edit]Redid it. There are still some iffy things about it though. Thanks a bunch to =Teh-Summoner-Yunie For helping me out a huge bunch![/edit]
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Sorry again!
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Whaaattttttttttttt noooooooooo!!
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Oh! Oh! And since the lower layer of the skirt is transparent, you should be able to see it though the skirt at the back~
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I think the stomach is too defined. I also think you should lengthen the skirt, because it looks like she has no privates
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the stomach definition is just for colourinf reference, lol. Just so I know the guidelines.
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But I don't think the colour should be where the 2 guidelines are, she's not ripped. . .
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its for shading, just so i dont go offcenter
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Eh, I'm doing my gallery editing first. Then I'll get onto fixing. Most probably when I get kicked off the net.
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I would so love to go over the lines for you to help fix things
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This is very sketchy, ignore the background I fix that in colouring. Aaaand what needs to be fixed?
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I think I'm too tired to give you a proper description for the time being, but I will say the anatomy is quite awkward~
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Please wait, I am doing something for you
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