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Published: 2017-10-09 22:24:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1320; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 7
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I really like slime girls, along with most monster girls, and drawing slime girls is rather fun.ΒI want to draw more when I get better.
I hope you enjoy, thanks! 'vvv'
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Heya! I'm here from ProjectComment and I hope you don't mind me giving some (possibly unhelpful and confusing) advice :>
Okay, first of all, I love this. Just the color scheme, the lighting, the background, it's all amazing imo. Though there are a few things that are a bit off to me
The shoulders are a bit odd, and one seems *slightly* longer than the other. Maybe make the left (her right) shoulder a bit smaller and that'll be perfect
Now the boobs. Maybe make them curve in a bit near the bottom of the page. And the point where they meet should be curved like the actual boobs were or maybe just two curved lines that make a cleavageΒ
The dark spots on her body are a bit distracting. Maybe making them less dark or adding less of them would help
The eyes looks a bit small / strange, but anime / manga style art seems to be your art style. Not too aware of the style that much, so that could just be your style, haha
Anyway, overall this drawing is really good and is definitely creative. I might not have been that helpful and maybe even a bit confusing, so I'm really sorry about that :/
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Thank you for the critique, I really appreciate it! 'vvv'
I've noticed those myself, especially about the shoulders and eyes xD I need to work more on anatomy and proportions.
Your advice wasn't confusing at all, and it will be helpful! Things I'll need to keep in mind for future works.
Again, thank you very much! >vvv<
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Ahh okie, glad I could help :>
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nice work on make it look liquidity and gooeyΒ
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γγγγ¨γοΌ:3
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