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The memories of Whitneywill never part,
For the love that we have
is forever in our heart.
She was a gift
that came down from above,
Who in God’s name
was filled with love.
I know that that day
we’ll never forget,
But the life that she had
we’ll never regret.
There were many
things that she told,
And each word she said
we’ll treasure like gold.
She had a smile
so honest and true,
And a twinkle in her eye,
that would stop your blue.
She lived a life,
never in vain,
So we hope that she went,
without any pain.
When God took her home
it was in her arm,
To make sure she’s safe,
and not in any harm.
I know that it’s hard
to let her go,
But here in our hearts
our love will still grow.
She’ll look down from heaven,
as we each live our life,
And help us get through,
our every life.
She’ll help us in life
as we carry on our way,
And give us the courage
to get through each day.
The time has come
for us to say good bye,
But we’ll keep her in our hearts
so we’ll never have to cry.
Whitey will be here,
every day with us all,
Till we see her in heaven
when God gives us our call.
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Comments: 6
somechick73 [2009-04-06 01:13:39 +0000 UTC]
Lots of rhyming, but needs more something. Not sure. It seems like it needs more story. But the rhyme scheme is good.
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PureSeduction In reply to somechick73 [2009-04-06 01:15:15 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... well idk what else to add... esp because I didn't know her as well as others. Thanks though
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somechick73 In reply to PureSeduction [2009-04-06 01:20:10 +0000 UTC]
Yeah hard to write about someone you hardly knew.
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PureSeduction In reply to somechick73 [2009-04-06 01:24:03 +0000 UTC]
Yeah.. it is. I think it came out good though.
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somechick73 In reply to PureSeduction [2009-04-06 01:24:38 +0000 UTC]
yeah the rhyming scheme is good.
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