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And we FINALLY leave this little park.

Ok, I'll be honest, I wanted to leave earlier, however a setting change just didn't make sense narratively to me until now (originally I actually had Elm come back and then they leave, but he really didn't need to be there for them to go to the Burnt Tower.) Like Elm was going to take them to a place to eat to try to get Silver to open up better, but also it felt like it would restrict what he'd be willing to say. And the battle was added in to replace a rather boring walk-and-talk, but it did result in a LOT of dialogue without a changing setting. That being said, most of it is finally through, but man my characters have a lot they need to say -_-

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Next: Pages 43-45 (Chapter 5)
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And we FINALLY leave this little park.

Ok, I'll be honest, I wanted to leave earlier, however a setting change just didn't make sense narratively to me until now (originally I actually had Elm come back and then they leave, but he really didn't need to be there for them to go to the Burnt Tower.) Like Elm was going to take them to a place to eat to try to get Silver to open up better, but also it felt like it would restrict what he'd be willing to say. And the battle was added in to replace a rather boring walk-and-talk, but it did result in a LOT of dialogue without a changing setting. That being said, most of it is finally through, but man my characters have a lot they need to say -_-