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It's actually reaching damn 8 pages... Damn. Well, Page 7 is only half way done. It is a page separated from page 6 since page 6 was originally over-shooted.
And those crocs are killing me.
Anyway, Zhan is originally designed after the Prince of Persia, where the prince can do wall run, climbing, jumping and so on. Zhan can too since he had the feat. But since Masters of Claws didnt require such skills, Zhan's true ability never really revealed. Now, it's like a short peek. And its always fun if someone else can do it with you.
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UnrealFox [2009-12-29 06:53:28 +0000 UTC]
Wall Run! Awesome! lol
That's very awesome, Crow and Zhan make a kick ass team but ...
>.0 They're out to kill you!! That's never good >.>; Well at least Zhan got into being a bandit before bandits felt like killing him and burning down his shop.
Another great entry lol, this story is really really good :3
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Purpleground02 In reply to UnrealFox [2009-12-29 10:45:51 +0000 UTC]
I guess they are bad couple. XD
The story did change accordingly to coop with the ideas. Originally, this part never existed. Well, the next page will take a while. I originally thought about having them finish the mission and maybe celebrate the new 2010 together. But then, I guess I need to sacrifice that to make sure things could ended up completely, not as in, hanging, skippy and rushed.
I don't know the overall quality of the story, but hearing you say so, I guess I am on a good track. thanx. Frankly, this is like writing fanfic. And comments are like review.
2 more days to 2010!!!!!!!!!!
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UnrealFox In reply to Purpleground02 [2010-01-01 14:16:42 +0000 UTC]
lol So what do you want to improve about your comic? I like the flow and how it's working because it started up slow with Zhan telling Crow he wanted to help, and it's been moving at a steady pace. But it's still VERY action packed lol he's a fast little guy X3
!Rat Style!
And I like to add helpful criticism when I can, elsewise I just shower stuff that I like in praise. lol Which is why I like your story so much, it's great! X3 Makes me wish that I drew alot more than I did play games or 3D model. Oh and if you draw Sa-Chi, don't do it without letting me PAY you for it X3
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