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Here I amFor all to see
Only when the sun is up
Do you know who I am
I know you
And everything you do
All because
I am,
Well just a part
Something you cant change
But in the dark
Is where I hide
And at night
I donβt exist
Itβs the only time I get to rest
For I do all you do
And see all that you see
But my world
Is just the flip side
Some say I stalk
Some say I hunt
But truly Im here
Solely for you
Just to walk all over me
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Comments: 15
onewithdarkness [2006-08-27 05:35:16 +0000 UTC]
wow, lovely concept, beautfully executed
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push-my-button In reply to onewithdarkness [2006-08-27 06:06:50 +0000 UTC]
why did you like it
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onewithdarkness In reply to push-my-button [2006-08-27 19:11:33 +0000 UTC]
it has flare, and relates to somrthing that everyone goes through in their lives
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push-my-button In reply to onewithdarkness [2006-08-28 02:52:16 +0000 UTC]
that makes sense
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themyssing [2006-08-27 05:10:44 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting concept, I like the format too.
Thumbs up...yesh.
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Farawayfaerie [2006-08-24 18:31:21 +0000 UTC]
NICE ONE!!!
I love how you personified the shadow.
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x-innocence-x [2006-08-24 18:10:39 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome. I love how it's open, but it still has bits and peices of rhyme in places. You captured the "shadow" theme very well here.
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