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Published: 2006-12-01 21:09:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 383; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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im sorry i havemistaken my heart for your door mat
please wipe your feet
before you enter
and grind my heart futher in the ground
for i know this time
is the last i ever let you enter
so do what you will
just rember
when you leave
thier is no coming back
for i will move my door mat
and change my locks
and my heart
will be mine again
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Comments: 12
Farawayfaerie [2007-02-01 19:32:43 +0000 UTC]
I was going to leave a comment on this one, because it is a very promienant peice...but then I looked and i already had.
And perhaps my first comment was foreshadowing.
We are not stupid.....are we?
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Beast57 [2006-12-13 21:09:59 +0000 UTC]
This is very nice in terms o poetry great job on the content! I like it alot! FAV!
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Littleblackbeetle [2006-12-12 09:17:27 +0000 UTC]
I know how this feels, to be a doormat for everyone else...
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Farawayfaerie [2006-12-08 03:24:56 +0000 UTC]
I couldnt hvae written it better. perhaps we need each other to heal.
i lovethe " i mistaken my heart for your doormat."
perhaps we look for love in the wrong places.......
maybe love is too present in our live fo us to notice it.....
or perhaps we have, and are afraid of it growing absent so therefor we leave it unacknowledged
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passionate1 [2006-12-02 01:47:55 +0000 UTC]
this has to be one of my favs!! its very moving and flows very nice...i LOVE it, specaly for i will move my door mat
and change my locks
and my heart
will be mine again
that is the best part...
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