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Published: 2006-08-14 20:11:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 162; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description this one may be a little diffrent
it might be harder to follow
but just rember
when you speek
that words do hurt
so watch what you say
or how you mean
when you talk
try to relax
and let every letter
crease your lips
so much that
its like a kiss
all the letters feel tender
then the vowles
have a bite
but do not worry
for evething you said was right
i cant change how it was said
but it changes me when it hits my head
and now i have had the pleasure
to devower
every special letter
my heart wilts
just like a frost bitten flower
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Comments: 8

ShiverBeast [2006-08-27 03:18:40 +0000 UTC]

I love the ending, it is beautiful. Brava on the structure.

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push-my-button In reply to ShiverBeast [2006-08-27 04:32:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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glarawen [2006-08-25 17:59:30 +0000 UTC]

Very good work. Interesting idea actually.

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push-my-button In reply to glarawen [2006-08-25 22:33:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Farawayfaerie [2006-08-15 15:02:41 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!!!!!!!
Wow...your writing just keeps getting better Ant!!!<3

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push-my-button In reply to Farawayfaerie [2006-08-15 15:11:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks hun ummm ummm ummm

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passionate1 [2006-08-14 22:38:13 +0000 UTC]

i like the frost bitten flower part it was pretty!

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push-my-button In reply to passionate1 [2006-08-15 13:30:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you i think im going to try it again using life to help picture fealings or thoughts

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