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Published: 2006-07-08 16:57:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description oh look another peice of paper
to express how i feel
how will it end this time
will it all rhyme
no matter what you do
paper will be there for you
for the pain anger rain
the pen is its only enemy
paper ever had
thanks to you it suffers
you write to help
as the ink leaves the pen
the paper crys in horror
the pain you cause
are you thankfull
that it will be there
and let you express how you feel
paper has seen it all
it knows your soul
no matter who you are

Anthony  Chilbert

Copyright ©2006 Anthony  Chilbert
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Comments: 4

Psytatious [2006-08-19 06:56:50 +0000 UTC]

Check your spelling, grammer, tenses, etc before posting. That is the first thing.

"A nother" is really another. Feel, rhyme, there, write, thankfull, feel (again), soul, these are only the spelling errors, in order.

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push-my-button In reply to Psytatious [2006-08-19 07:52:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the help i shall chane it

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Psytatious In reply to push-my-button [2006-08-19 17:17:44 +0000 UTC]

Change? Hehe. Once the spelling errors are fixed, I'll go read it again, and give you more feedback if you like.

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push-my-button In reply to Psytatious [2006-08-19 19:52:54 +0000 UTC]

i fixed the spelling errors please read it again when you get the chance

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