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Published: 2007-02-23 03:12:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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for all thoes who need somthingi have nothing
for i have given up hope
lost in my soundings
i know i just must
grow old from this pain
end enjoyed that witch have not ganed
but still i look on ward
into the sun
and hope some one will save me
from what i have become
i fear i have gone to far
and i hope with all my might
that it might be true
that its all in my mind
for imΒ Β afread to see whats next for me
not poor dear me
im sorry you will see
to all thoes who cared
i have drempt of the end
i have seen how fragle i am
just like a rose locked
in a dark room
i have begune
to see
what will be come of me
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Comments: 7
everlastingindigo [2007-02-24 02:11:29 +0000 UTC]
my advanced critique?... stop trying to type and drink at the same fucking time. oh and the couch misses you... hahaha.
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push-my-button In reply to everlastingindigo [2007-02-24 03:14:47 +0000 UTC]
ha ha you have no idea
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Farawayfaerie [2007-02-23 05:31:18 +0000 UTC]
By far one of the best.
its ok i have given up too...now you can continue to be you.
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everlastingindigo [2007-02-23 04:05:55 +0000 UTC]
just keep breathing... you know where to find me if you need me.
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onewithdarkness [2007-02-23 03:34:55 +0000 UTC]
nothing is needed.
btw, how goes the project?
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push-my-button In reply to onewithdarkness [2007-02-23 03:36:32 +0000 UTC]
the progect is sloow
just like me in the rain
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onewithdarkness In reply to push-my-button [2007-02-23 03:41:36 +0000 UTC]
amen, good luck.
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