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PuzzledHeartBox — Apollo's Fall
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Published: 2015-09-10 06:00:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 611; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Sunken in thoughts along perennial shores,
As an olden statuette gilded, but wore.
Long left agape beyond Horizon’s wall.
What once roamed the most ostentatious of halls,
Now narrates the amaranthine beauty of Apollo’s lore.
How he had come to be seen as the one to abhor.
For once a god whom stood pristine and tall,
Turned to judging people and orchestrate their fall.
Oh such fate to be judged at Horizon’s shore.
To be cursed out of reach of all you’d adore.
Apollo did fall from his grace above all
To be forever enslaved as unreachable wall.

 



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Comments: 14

Chezzy-Am [2015-11-03 15:26:13 +0000 UTC]

I didn't get this poem. Enlighten me.

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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to Chezzy-Am [2015-11-08 21:20:46 +0000 UTC]

Apollo's the sun god

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Chezzy-Am In reply to PuzzledHeartBox [2015-11-08 22:46:02 +0000 UTC]

So? Explain it to me, Bae!

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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to Chezzy-Am [2015-11-08 23:09:33 +0000 UTC]

The explanation's given in the poem.
It's about Apollo and how he's always seen at the Horizon, out of reach. 
His fall(the setting of the sun). 

Somehow it's pretty much a harmony of the natural phenomenon (our sun) and the mythological person (Apollo).
If that makes any sense..

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Chezzy-Am In reply to PuzzledHeartBox [2015-11-09 07:27:49 +0000 UTC]

So it's a story about the Sun which rises and falls. Lame.

No wonder I didn't get it. There was nothing more than a poem about the Sun. A bland poem if I ever read any.

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LvKA3 [2015-09-10 06:07:31 +0000 UTC]

So your muse is back, eh?

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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to LvKA3 [2015-09-10 06:15:25 +0000 UTC]

Yes, and no. I'm not at all pleased with this poem

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LvKA3 In reply to PuzzledHeartBox [2015-09-10 06:17:01 +0000 UTC]

And the other that you just uploaded yesterday?

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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to LvKA3 [2015-09-10 06:32:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm content with it

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LvKA3 In reply to PuzzledHeartBox [2015-09-10 06:34:14 +0000 UTC]

Well that's certainly a start. As is this. If you aren't pleased with this one then work on it some more. I've a private matter to discuss with you, so I'll be sending a note along here shortly.

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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to LvKA3 [2015-09-10 06:59:30 +0000 UTC]

Very well

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LvKA3 In reply to PuzzledHeartBox [2015-09-10 07:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Was it everything you thought it would be and less?

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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to LvKA3 [2015-09-10 07:21:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm quite surprised, but happy.

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LvKA3 In reply to PuzzledHeartBox [2015-09-10 07:23:11 +0000 UTC]

Well that's what matters most.

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