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Published: 2015-07-13 08:14:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 510; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Your eyes wide open,raindrops cascading from your paling face.
Such abhorrent sight, yet so beautifully captivating.
This iridescent light, reflecting on your bloodied sclera
Whilst the concrete turns red.
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Comments: 19
ShadowWorldRed [2015-11-06 00:35:22 +0000 UTC]
I must admit I'd title this innocently,
to increase the blow of the final line.
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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to ShadowWorldRed [2015-11-08 21:21:56 +0000 UTC]
Ah, but is it truly innocently?
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ShadowWorldRed In reply to PuzzledHeartBox [2015-11-08 22:17:39 +0000 UTC]
I would be guilty of a dastardly lie!
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Chezzy-Am [2015-08-02 18:23:51 +0000 UTC]
The person died because someone killed them. That's my two cents from this poem
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Sameore [2015-07-23 19:29:06 +0000 UTC]
Hahahahaha that's so fascinating to see someone cryin'!
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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to Sameore [2015-07-23 19:29:44 +0000 UTC]
Yes, crying, not at all dying
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Sameore In reply to PuzzledHeartBox [2015-07-23 19:33:17 +0000 UTC]
Naaah, not at all... everything's fine.
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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to DoubleDandE [2015-07-14 04:02:46 +0000 UTC]
Murderous depends on your point of view
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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to Nightreign123 [2015-07-13 10:52:02 +0000 UTC]
I hadn't looked at it like that myself.
I'm glad you shared your thoughts with me.
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Nightreign123 In reply to PuzzledHeartBox [2015-07-13 11:55:31 +0000 UTC]
I like vampires. What can I say?
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