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qahthrrynne β€” Autumn Winds
Published: 2006-11-10 01:39:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 202; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Description Do you ever have those times when the night feels like it's full of magic? When everything seems to glitter as a reprise from the dull greyscale of the city in daylight. You'll be standing there at the bus stop, mabye, or walking home, and the wind will blow, and then the world will change. No more chilly autumn evening; this night seems to be lit with some kind of inner glow. The wind shapes the trees, and leaves and papers dance in ever-changing circles, as if unseen conductors whirled among them. You look around at the new world, eyes wide, wind whipping at your hair and clothing. Everywhere you look, you see a picture. Every voice you hear has a story needing to be told. Everything looks so beautiful that you almost forget to breathe.

Eyes, ears and mind wide open, you wander aimlessly through the bright, busy streets, soaking up the sights and sounds. You may get an odd look or two from people you pass, adults who are too old and wordly to feel the magic dancing on the wind. Coming to your sense, you realize that the almost-winter night is coming in, bringing ith it a distinct chill. You scramble home, mind brimming with new ideas, determined to write every story, draw every picture.

You tumble through the front door, eyes aglow. As you enter, the warm air hits you. The smell of hot food and hot chocolate reach your nose. You determine to just have aΒ Β bite, and a warm drink. You'll just defrost a bit before you share your magic with the world. Hours later, as you curl up in your bed, you realize you never wrote those stories down. But you're tired, and you'll remember in the morning....
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Comments: 17

kagami-gakure [2006-11-11 21:51:55 +0000 UTC]

GYAAAAAA. OoO

WTF *is humbled* Crappy prose my black ass, Hilary. My black ass. Oh God I can connect with this... You are banned from ever saying you cannot write, EVER.

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qahthrrynne In reply to kagami-gakure [2006-11-12 01:25:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, bubs. I you. Remember when we were at the bus stop, and I asked you if you had believed in magic as a kid? Yeah... This is what I was thinking about.

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kagami-gakure In reply to qahthrrynne [2006-11-12 03:12:55 +0000 UTC]

That's funny, because I actually remember that.

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mrsfrankenstien [2006-11-11 16:05:59 +0000 UTC]

...Now I kind of want to say I DON'T get that feeling, just to contradict what everybody else has said. But, as ever, your incoherencies make perfect sense.

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qahthrrynne In reply to mrsfrankenstien [2006-11-11 18:04:29 +0000 UTC]

Yays. I win.

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xdeathbunnyx [2006-11-10 22:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, I DEFINITELY get that feeling. ^^

And like Katie said, AMAZING imagery! <3 I really did feel like I was there. As usual, your writing is amazing. 'u'

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qahthrrynne In reply to xdeathbunnyx [2006-11-11 00:19:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, hon.

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Zuquo [2006-11-10 03:33:40 +0000 UTC]

I definitely know what you mean, but tonight after rehearsal I thought I was going to die. No writing every story (or song in my case) for me. Atleast not tonight. Maybe next Wednesday....yup Wednesday.

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qahthrrynne In reply to Zuquo [2006-11-11 00:19:51 +0000 UTC]

It just happened. I didn't really expect it, or anything. Thanks!

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Snurflets [2006-11-10 03:23:33 +0000 UTC]

This gave me shivers. I love it. Though I've never felt that way. I think it only happens if you live in the city. Cause then you actually end up spending more time outside. I'm either inside or in a car most of the time.

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qahthrrynne In reply to Snurflets [2006-11-11 00:18:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it so much! You should try it sometime.

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padfootmoony-grl [2006-11-10 03:10:44 +0000 UTC]

I adore this. It's how I feel on a regular basis, really. Like a thousand stories need to be told, and I'm the only one that knows them... And I never remember them in the morning... It's sad. Beautiful. <3

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qahthrrynne In reply to padfootmoony-grl [2006-11-11 00:16:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It's nice to hear from everyone who says they ALSO feel that way.

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blackeyedbirdy [2006-11-10 02:03:41 +0000 UTC]

Yep, that's totally something I feel too!
Great concept, AMAZING writing! (I love your imagery), really gives the reader a feeling of relity; as if they were there.

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qahthrrynne In reply to blackeyedbirdy [2006-11-10 02:18:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, hon! I figured a bunch of you guys would be able to relate to the feeling.

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spazannah [2006-11-10 01:47:02 +0000 UTC]

I know exactly what you're talking about! I thought it was just me...Amazing writing, I can really connect

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qahthrrynne In reply to spazannah [2006-11-10 02:18:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I was really just getting the feeling tonight, after rehearsal.

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