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qahthrrynne — Helpless Mornings
Published: 2006-09-11 21:38:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 232; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Waking up in an empty bed.
Did we fight?
Did I forget?
I don't know whose fault it was,
This time.

I hear her in the bathroom, and think
She's still here.
It wasn't bad.
This time, the fight must not have been
Too bad.

I hear her triip, then hear her swear.
I'll stay here.
Stay in bed.
I know I can't do anything,
Can't help.

I wish I could go in there,
Go to her.
To tell her.
I wish I could make it better,
Help her.

I can never make her believe me,
She's perfect,
I love her.
Though I know she can't believe me,
It's true.
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Comments: 13

spazannah [2006-09-16 16:09:33 +0000 UTC]

I think I like this one even better than "Broken Mornings" because it's just so sad and sweet! Amazing!

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qahthrrynne In reply to spazannah [2006-09-16 17:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And thanks for the fav!

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kagami-gakure [2006-09-12 02:49:24 +0000 UTC]

BUBS. That's GOOD. The words flow so well together, and the ending line leaves a very clean cut (As opposed to other, crappier poetry, which has a frayed edge)
I love your open-ended rhythmic structure. Have fun in Playwriting! (Because I think Ben said that it was full of emo kids who write dark poetry all day long... )

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qahthrrynne In reply to kagami-gakure [2006-09-12 20:56:43 +0000 UTC]

Yo. Playwriting IS full of emo kids. We're SO emo. Totally. No, really... Thanks so much!

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Zuquo [2006-09-12 01:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Pretty...and sad. It's like For Good and that's my favoritest song ever.

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Zuquo In reply to Zuquo [2006-09-15 01:21:55 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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qahthrrynne In reply to Zuquo [2006-09-12 01:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's hugely flattering, especially coming from you. Thanks!

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xdeathbunnyx [2006-09-12 00:30:48 +0000 UTC]

Was this what you wrote in Playwriting? 'u' I'm glad my lending you a pencil helped you write something so beautiful!!
Wow, Katie's so lucky to get these <3 You're so talented!

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qahthrrynne In reply to xdeathbunnyx [2006-09-12 01:55:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And thanks again for your pencil. XD

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Snurflets [2006-09-11 23:03:52 +0000 UTC]

Awww... -tear- I love it. It makes me think of Travis though that probably wasn't in your intentions at all. I'd like to read the story the character is from.

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qahthrrynne In reply to Snurflets [2006-09-11 23:24:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! No, that wasn't in mind, but that works too. I'm not sure what the characters are from, actually, I've never seen any of the work.

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blackeyedbirdy [2006-09-11 22:37:51 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOD. Seriously, this is amazing! I love this some much. I was feeling really sad today, and this cheered my up so much. This is so well-written; I love the patterns..and just....GOD, I honestly adore this. THANK YOU SO MUCH.

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qahthrrynne In reply to blackeyedbirdy [2006-09-11 23:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! I wrote it during Playwriting, while Victoria was blabbing about the course outline XD. Thanks for the fav, hon!

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