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qahthrrynne — Sleepless Dreams
Published: 2006-12-14 02:00:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 292; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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How is't that every time I close my eyesI see you smile, so sweetly, in my mind?
I lie and rend the air with longing sighs,
No sleep - no leaving thoughts of you behind.
When I lay down at night to take my rest,
I hear your voice come whisp'ring in my ear.
It makes my heart beat faster 'neath my breast
As I can almost feel you lying near.
Your laugh, it seems, does echo in my head.
The briefest words do in my heart reside.
And though I lie, in longing, in my bed,
I yet cannot lay thoughts of you aside.
For in my mind, a cruel place though it seems,
I know that I shall see you in my dreams.
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Well of course I read it in school and you know what I think! ^^ <3 This is gorgeous! And since you like the sonnet format, it'd be nice if you wrote more ^u^
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Perhaps I will. Sonnets are one of those poetry forms that I simply CANNOT write without the proper inspiration, which is why I write them so rarely.
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But of course, when you have the proper inspiration, they're AMAZING. ^^
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It's very nice. I want to draw a picture for it but I can't. I can't because I suck and no other reason.
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You totally COULD draw a picture for it if you wanted to. Shut up.
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I've just been having...problems... with my art lately. I'm probably going to rant about it in a journal entry.
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FAVOURITE FAVOURITE FAVOURITE ZOMG
You've heard this at Starbucks, and it says 'critique not desired', so no critique todays.
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It was "critiques no desired" because I was feeling bitchy, and I didn't want any stupid people telling me I was being emo. An actual critique would be fine. Thanks for the fav!
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Wow...a dreamlover mentality. I like it. I like how your imagination can please you. For a while, I've been searching for things in my head, but it left me restless.
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Thank you! Like I tried to express in the last two lines, though I am a dreamer and a hopeless romantic, my jaded side knows I'm not doing myself any good by imagining. I'm glad you liked it!
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Very nice! You know I'm in love with it....the connet format is great and the ryhming copulet at the end is a perfect addition!
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Thank you! Yeah, I love sonnet format, too.
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Inspiring and beautiful in such a sad way. I'm sure everyone has felt something akin to this at some point... Thank you for voicing it so poetically. I send you my hugs and love and sympathy to help get through this too.
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Thank you, both for the compliments and the support!
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no its not bad at all. it something people can relate...in a way...?
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
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