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Published: 2006-10-01 01:23:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 122; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description The young man stands like a statue. A statue clad in military uniform, camouflage, to be exact. One hand is wrapped around the subway pole, the other clenched tightly at his side, arm slanted slightly away from his body by the regulation army bag slung across his shoulder. His stance is strong, and proud. Feet are planted apart, back straight, head up. But his face... It tells another story. His brow is creased, a small furrow in the centre. He swallows hard, his adam's apple bobbing. Small signs, to be sure, but there nonetheless. And what is he seeing as he stares at nothing, out the subway window as the tunnel rushes by? Is it family, friends, a loved one that he's leaving behind? Or maybe that he's returning to, and "Will they look the same?" he wonders to himself. Will his jokes still make her smile? Will he still be his friends? Will her hair be going gray? What is he afraid of? Is he scared of what he'll find, or is he haunted by what he left behind? No one can answer. Not even him.
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Comments: 8

xdeathbunnyx [2006-10-01 16:49:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow, yeah...excellent idea! 'n' It did make me sad though. You definitely have a way of inducing certain emotions in people! <3

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qahthrrynne In reply to xdeathbunnyx [2006-10-01 17:47:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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Snurflets [2006-10-01 16:14:34 +0000 UTC]

I have thoughts like this when in public places as well. Generally at the airport, but then I'm rarely on the subway. This is beautiful piece. I lurved it.

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qahthrrynne In reply to Snurflets [2006-10-01 16:16:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Yeah, airports are awesome for people watching.

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blackeyedbirdy [2006-10-01 02:46:12 +0000 UTC]


I love this, and you know it. You've got quite a talent for writing in character. <3<3<3

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qahthrrynne In reply to blackeyedbirdy [2006-10-01 02:47:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, bubs!

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Mogira [2006-10-01 01:45:34 +0000 UTC]

That's very observant of you. Short, but well written. Well done! ^^

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qahthrrynne In reply to Mogira [2006-10-01 02:25:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank yew! ^.^

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