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Published: 2005-11-11 03:22:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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The devil of realityHas dealt his mortal blow.
And now I hang from but a thread,
And see my death below.
Blind to all that I have done
Until this moment, I
While thinking back to horrors past
Now only wish to die.
I wish that I could tell them,
That YOU brought my demise,
But into this, I know I walked,
With wide and open eyes.
But blinded by the glamour
That you shed where e'er you tread
I did not see the trouble,
Did not know your love was dead.
My arms are getting weaker,
Like the beating in my chest
Of my broken, bleeding heart,
That lies hidden 'neath my breast.
And now as I prepare myself
To feel that final snap,
I feel a sense of joy as I
See freedom from your trap.
Comments: 6
mrsfrankenstien [2005-11-13 21:00:02 +0000 UTC]
This is my favourite thing you've ever written. Like, ever. And that's saying a lot, from me, as I'm sure you know. But still. I love this.
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qahthrrynne In reply to mrsfrankenstien [2005-11-13 23:56:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! =3 You need to put more stuffs up. F'r example, Shadows.
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spazannah [2005-11-11 03:42:55 +0000 UTC]
Thats freakin scary. Like knowing you're going to die....*_*
Great stuff, you really are so talented....your rhyming scheme is wicked cool, I love it!!
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qahthrrynne In reply to spazannah [2005-11-11 12:38:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much... You're so supportive!
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Majesty12345 [2005-11-11 03:24:33 +0000 UTC]
Its pretty cool, i would add something a little more "you will die" But iots just a thought
Q(''Q) Kirby!!!
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qahthrrynne In reply to Majesty12345 [2005-11-11 12:38:08 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm glad you like it! And thank you for your suggestion.
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