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Published: 2012-09-26 02:38:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 376; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 2
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Description Name: Ripple Of Small Brook
Gender: Male
Age: 17 Moons
Rank: Healer/Med. cat
Brief Personalty: a quiet calm minded shy tom, very intelligent. He can be fierce with his opinion or what not. He can sometimes feel every moment in these tribe lives can be a good or bad omen. He is very mystious sometimes, and when alone can feel comfortable and runs around acting like a kit or warrior. Which he tries to keep a hidden secret.
Brief History: A only kit in litter, his mother died as he was born and had to nurse on another kitting mother. As he grew up his father taught him everything which then his father was highly surprized when he became a medicine cat. Later on as he became a medicine cat his father died in a terrible accident. Also as a kit he went on many "extreme" adventures, -leaving nursery for apprintices den xP- with other kits. He was also still highly intellegant and as he was being trained as a warrior or whatever you call it in tribe life.... he took much more interest in herbs and would study and stare at them all day if you could, he'd even visit the medicine cat. In the middle of warrior training he admitted he wanted to be medicine cat which he knew was the right descison and the medicine cat was very proud. (MAYBE)
Brief Appearance: A slick long legged tom with a long tail to help balance himself. When he runs he can be a bit clumsy because of his long legs, other times he can be very graceful. He has a bit of fluff on ears. He seems to be a bit slim and so on. :3 He also has a photographic memory so he can remember herbs easily and the places for them. At night his pelt can glow a dark silver if moon is bright or he can be unseen. He has dark beauitful amber eyes. And white claws and soft dark smokey paw pads. In the winter he gets fluffy and thicker fur, and sometimes because it's so light out and of the snow and stuff, his pelt can sometimes/possibly get lighter. His fur is also really soft or silky. (or whatever good word there is)
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Absrtasylum-Meakaira [2012-09-26 10:30:07 +0000 UTC]

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He is quite the beautiful tribe cat! I do love his name, it feels very calming, as does his personality, which is fitting. Seeing how both parents are dead and he is an only kit, I'm sure his background is interesting as well. He has a great color scheme- the monochrome fur and vibrant orange eyes really make an impact, which is a technique I personally abuse often. The lines are very smooth and well-drawn, as well. I do find, however, that sometimes less is more with complicated patterns. I can see that the scheme is spots and crosses, which is good, because sometimes people use so many different looking markings that you're not sure what the relationship is! I do find that taking a marking scheme and concentrating it to only one or two areas on the character is more striking and effective, though. Say, if you were to use the spots and crosses, and have them concentrated mainly on his rump or tail, and then keep another marking seperate, like around his eyes only, or his ears only. Or maybe keep the eyes and/or ear markings only, and then the spots on his back? Just a suggestion, but you should express yourself however you want! Excellent picture.

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qaradise In reply to Absrtasylum-Meakaira [2012-09-27 00:35:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much! <:

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Absrtasylum-Meakaira In reply to qaradise [2012-09-27 15:37:11 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I'm glad you thought it was fair, I really do try to give constructive criticism

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qaradise In reply to Absrtasylum-Meakaira [2012-09-28 00:57:19 +0000 UTC]

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BlastedShow132 [2012-09-28 01:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!
Everything but the reference sheet itself is done wrong, though.
Please, read the rules again.

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qaradise In reply to BlastedShow132 [2012-09-29 00:43:01 +0000 UTC]

Fixed again, SOOOOOO sorry. Is this better? Again uber sorry I worked hard on this!!! <333'''

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BlastedShow132 In reply to qaradise [2012-09-29 00:45:19 +0000 UTC]

Its' perfect now <3

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qaradise In reply to BlastedShow132 [2012-09-29 00:47:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! And thanks for being so patient!

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qaradise In reply to BlastedShow132 [2012-09-28 22:51:10 +0000 UTC]

[link] fixed please consider. c:

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BlastedShow132 In reply to qaradise [2012-09-29 00:10:31 +0000 UTC]

Sorry.. Its' not fixed..
Personality, Appearance and History have to be at LEAST 3 lines EACH.

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qaradise In reply to BlastedShow132 [2012-09-29 00:20:37 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I'll finish. Sorry!

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BlastedShow132 In reply to qaradise [2012-09-29 00:42:37 +0000 UTC]

It was only a misunderstanding, its' okay!

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qaradise In reply to BlastedShow132 [2012-09-29 00:43:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again so sorry I've been to busy to finish typing everything then I forget and it's a MESS. XD

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BlastedShow132 In reply to qaradise [2012-09-29 00:45:44 +0000 UTC]

It's good, now, would you like to RP?

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qaradise In reply to BlastedShow132 [2012-09-29 00:46:46 +0000 UTC]

Sure, and did I get the position?

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BlastedShow132 In reply to qaradise [2012-09-29 00:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Yep!
Updating the Clan Blog now.. remember to post the info there aswell...
Meet you in the Creek chatroom..

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qaradise In reply to BlastedShow132 [2012-09-29 02:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Okay sorry I didn't make it was eating dinner!!!

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BlastedShow132 In reply to qaradise [2012-09-29 02:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Im there

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qaradise In reply to BlastedShow132 [2012-09-29 02:20:42 +0000 UTC]

kk

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qaradise In reply to BlastedShow132 [2012-09-28 22:40:19 +0000 UTC]

I'll re-do sorry had no time, please think about it though. c:

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Paqt8 [2012-09-27 00:57:12 +0000 UTC]

This is so cool!

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covets [2012-09-26 23:35:11 +0000 UTC]

posts this in the link i gave you now!! D:<

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qaradise In reply to covets [2012-09-27 00:34:58 +0000 UTC]

I did D: sorry I havent been on the comp at all

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covets In reply to qaradise [2012-09-27 00:35:17 +0000 UTC]

ok

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MinistrSinister [2012-09-26 20:14:14 +0000 UTC]

epic lawl

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Maekii [2012-09-26 11:59:19 +0000 UTC]

What group is this for???

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BlastedShow132 In reply to Maekii [2012-09-28 19:51:16 +0000 UTC]

As the founder of the group I will tell you.

We would love to have you become a member!

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FleetwoodMacGirl [2012-09-26 10:47:26 +0000 UTC]

Isn't the healer like the leader of the tribe? And always named Stoneteller or something?

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qaradise In reply to FleetwoodMacGirl [2012-09-27 00:34:34 +0000 UTC]

This group is a bit diff

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covets [2012-09-26 02:51:29 +0000 UTC]

also send me a note to start rp.

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qaradise In reply to covets [2012-09-27 00:34:39 +0000 UTC]

k

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covets In reply to qaradise [2012-09-27 00:35:06 +0000 UTC]

read all my notes ; __ ;

i'll make a join.me

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qaradise In reply to covets [2012-09-27 00:40:54 +0000 UTC]

I have to clean my room today's really busy and tommorrows worse but Friday I'll get on around 5? And tomorrow around 7

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covets In reply to qaradise [2012-09-27 00:45:14 +0000 UTC]

mkay make sure to note blasted about your app

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qaradise In reply to covets [2012-09-27 02:42:11 +0000 UTC]

Kk

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covets [2012-09-26 02:48:17 +0000 UTC]

oh my ; D

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qaradise In reply to covets [2012-09-27 00:34:46 +0000 UTC]

pretty?

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covets In reply to qaradise [2012-09-27 00:35:23 +0000 UTC]

yes <33

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