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And here we come with chapter three. Apologies for taking so long.So yeah.. my suggestions were:
-Silver
-Silv Co (blame ChilledCubchoo)
-Serena passing out
-Serena shrinking
So yeah.
Again you decide: where should this go on now?
Also I made a little mod to the stage - the stage ground has been changed from green (grass texture) to brown (ground) - the first chapter has actually been updated to reflect this change.
Chapter 2: Second chapter
The typical rules however:
-no deaths! Not at all! I don't mind if you decide they end up under the feet of pokémon or even a trainer. As long as they make it out mostly unharmed. So being stepped on by a trainer while being in a city is rather impossible as I don't think being stepped on with shoes on concrete is survivable. So keep those things out.
-unaware content is fine - but yeah, interaction is more welcome. Interaction with pokémon, with trainers? Welcome!
-you want a certain model in it: I wouldn't mind in general if it somehow fits. Link me to it - no matter what type of model it is if it somehow fits in. Sure! (Even if you want additional tinies in)
-I repeat, characters are off-canon, so don't worry too much about being on character - if things get too ridiculous I'd tell but yeah.
Models:
-Adrian by Sayer09
-Link by me
-Pikachu by me based on Pikachu from Pokémon X but it uses face expressions by the Pikachu by BryanRush (used with permission)
-Sylveon and Spearow ripped by me, also Pokémon X
-Serena by Darkliger01
-Silver by Yukimarufan
-Stage ripped by me
-Grass from the MME Grass Effect
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Comments: 20
ChilledCubchoo [2015-10-05 00:05:40 +0000 UTC]
Ahh yesh! Silv co! xD And it seemed they had an ulterior motif! Also i liked that nickname of "Silveon" xD
I just realised something, for a comic as random as this, you should of put May in the background when Serena said "May i see what you seem to have?" (Which by the way, i loved that "See what you see-m" xD) she should be like "Did someone call me?" xD
I also LOVED how you made serena just throw herself to the ground and just slept just like that! xD
Loved that size comparison with Serena's hand and the two guys x3
Ahh suggestions... Mmmm...I guess you could make the "It just Dawn-ed upon me" joke As Dawn appears, i mean IF Serena Shrinks then we always gota have a giantess to look after the smaller ones! x3 If she doesn't shrink, then...
Ahh! The good ol' thunderbolt from Pikachu!...Though that would be a bit hard to pull off what with the effects and all... A tail whip then? xD Pikachu's tail whip on the face right when one of the guys think climbing on her is a good idea then she wakes up right to the sight of them! xD
All in all, this was a great addition to the series! I loved it!
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qiaoLink In reply to ChilledCubchoo [2015-10-05 06:26:31 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I always call my Sylveons Silveon. Because you know, creative nicknaming!
I always name my Ledian Ledyan too. Because creativity... I DON'T HAVE IT.
For other ideas.. well, it's mostly suggestion based as I said.. it will follow a general story and such - and yeah random events can occur. I don't know who to blame for that Silv Co. and Silver appearance. I think it's some strange girl who's also part of this conversation - maybe you heard of her.
But yeah, I kinda loved how it was possible to give Serena all those derp faces (Silver on the other hand had such a difficult face that I tried to avoid showing it XD).
Actually she wasn't really supposed to throw herself on the ground.. but more like: "Things like this don't exist" and think she's dreaming - and passes out XD.
For size comparison: well, like I said before, the sizes are fixed - just to ensure that noone thinks I'd be changing scales throughout the story (unless a story event causes the sizes to change but no random change from frame to frame).
For other girls: I do have my ideas.. I was thinking of keeping it mostly Kalos based so Shauna has a high chance of getting in but for Dawn - I like her^^ so I'll obviously take it into consideration.
For attacks of Pikachu: Yes, I was checking effects.. difficult thing.. I was also thinking of Iron Tail - ouch, that's gotta hurt XD.
I'm absolutely glad you liked it ^^
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cubedcinder128 [2015-10-04 15:36:15 +0000 UTC]
Maybe tug on her hair to wake her up, and when Serena still thinks she's dreaming, they pinch her hand.
But that's just me. Whatever happens I'm sure I'll like.
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qiaoLink In reply to cubedcinder128 [2015-10-04 17:06:38 +0000 UTC]
I'll put it on my list ^^
I'm glad you enjoy it
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Samarkana [2015-10-04 14:52:00 +0000 UTC]
I just loved her facial expressions during this!
Hmmmm anger the pikachu and have him chase you guys down. Thus Serena wakes up from the noise.
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qiaoLink In reply to Samarkana [2015-10-04 15:01:40 +0000 UTC]
Also the facial expressions on her were hard.. but yeah, it was worth it
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Samarkana In reply to qiaoLink [2015-10-04 15:03:16 +0000 UTC]
I was laughing so hard. It r really turned out great!
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qiaoLink In reply to Samarkana [2015-10-04 14:57:54 +0000 UTC]
The Pikachu is a her - look at the tail XD Other than that.. Yes, that will totally work because Pikachu is so slow ^^
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Samarkana In reply to qiaoLink [2015-10-04 15:00:43 +0000 UTC]
XD ohhh my bad hahaha. Chubby Pika lol
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Nodqfan144 [2015-10-04 14:42:43 +0000 UTC]
Maybe they could pinch/bite her fingers to wake her up.
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qiaoLink In reply to Nodqfan144 [2015-10-04 14:57:26 +0000 UTC]
Going to take it into options XD
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AdmiralTerk In reply to qiaoLink [2015-10-04 15:17:04 +0000 UTC]
it should. XD everyone's ticklish under there.
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qiaoLink In reply to AdmiralTerk [2015-10-04 15:20:57 +0000 UTC]
There or the feet.. but yeah, that'd never get the shoes off her, so that's certainly no option XD
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AdmiralTerk In reply to qiaoLink [2015-10-04 15:33:49 +0000 UTC]
go for the armpits. XD just be careful not to get caught in her flailing.
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