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QmagicalQpineappleQ — reeeeeeeeeally bad first try
Published: 2006-12-23 21:19:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 67; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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allright, my first official attempt at anime, this is a rough draft, unshaded and uncolored, (i need my viz major friends to help me on those ^^)please let me kno how this looks and what needs to be fixed ^^
ALL VIZ MAJOR FRIENDS GET ONLINE AND HELP ME FIX THIS!!!
hope it doesnt look too awful -^^-, i thought i did purty good for my first try
**this will be edited a few times so if there's anythin u see that needs fixing (that's easily fixable) please tell me so i can fix it along w/ everythin my viz major friends tell me to fix ^^!!!!!!
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lies, its awful!
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^XD
well anyways that's pretty excellant
I've noticed that every person who draws people somewhat cartoonish always starts out with the hands behind thier backs XDD
Because I have a blunt persona here's what I have to say she needs ribs, more defined calves and shoulders. But other than that, that's pretty good! Better then my first anime aliens XD
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i had one hand in front, but the pose looked really uncomfortable for someone to just be standin, and i couldnt fix it w/o redoin the whole thing so i left both hands behind her back.
wot do u mean she needs ribs? help me malina !!i'll try and fix the calves & shoulders.... (i'll bring the original and ask liz for help ^^ shadin is my biggest problem so i hafta ask liz bout that too -______________-)
glad u like it thou ^^ i spent a long time on it, so glad it came out recognizable as anime ^^
thanky malina ^^
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like her chest (ribs area) is too small to support her body. and I'm not talking about her boobs. XD
but yeah I'll draw a thingy for you if you want
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OOOh, yea i realized that when i scanned it in, "this isnt proportional", i might be able to fix that,otherwise, oh well ^^ thanx for ur help malina ^^
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elley work on drawing hair it needs work but other than that not to bad
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really ??????????? yay!!!! thankies b!!!!!!!!!!!! i didnt spend to long on the hair so i understand that it wasnt so great ^^
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well aren't you happy im honest ^^
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