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Published: 2013-03-25 19:32:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 556; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 2
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So slowly..MURHR watches
i hunt them eue
Not looking for realistic but can I have some critiques on the anatomy? (besides the face >w>)
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I like it a lot!
Sorry the critique is in a comment. I can't add it otherwise. (why do you hate me iPod?)
But anyways.....one thing you can do is, if the broken heart is supposed to be in the middle or something like that, would be to have it partly hidden by the fluffy chest fur it appears to be attached to. That would give it a bit more dimension, I believe. I like the paws, though I think the front ones should be a bit more rounded at the bottom so they don't seem completly flat. Adding detail to them Is completly up to you. Another thing you can do is add a hind leg/paw though this depends on how the cat is sitting. Anyways, hope I helped!
~Rie~
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thanks for the critique ;w;
i didnt do much on the front paws because i cant draw paws well XD
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hmmm so I'm going to be HONEST so if I say something harsh I dun mean it.alsoiaintanexpert
So I'm not going to say anything about the head/face so,the neck could be a little fluffy and the body looks kinda skinny,but for your style and level of experience it's very good!The front paws could use a little detail and she/he/it could have feet under it's thighs in the back so it looks like she has some.If you wanted it to be more realistic or something like that it could have a little more fluff (Idunnowhatiswithmeandfluff) the shoulder blade could show on it's back coming out like showing. As for the rest I'll leave since you didn't request a whole critique
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thanks for the critque ewe
but i dont know what you mean by "the shoulder blade could show on it's back coming out like showing"
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ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hard to explain
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