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Published: 2012-08-05 07:29:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 7652; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 544
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The continuation of this comic has ceased.Please do not bother adding this to your favorites, or adding it to a group (or add it to your faves, I won't stop you).
I didn't see any gain in continuing this comic. Sure, my story-telling and artistic vision would improve, as I went along.
But I never really felt a sense of accomplishment, no matter how hard I tried; thus, the story will go unfinished.
I am truly sorry, and I admit my failure; however I will not let this short-coming eat away at my soul.
EDIT: I changed the number of shots fired by Colin (the white agent
Cover: quadren4.deviantart.com/art/SC…
Page 1: THIS PAGE!
Page 2: quadren4.deviantart.com/art/SC…
Page 3: quadren4.deviantart.com/art/SC…
Page 4: quadren4.deviantart.com/art/SC…
Page 5: quadren4.deviantart.com/art/SC…
YEA!
First page, DONE! Arguably, the hardest page.
Choosing an art style was the hardest part, because there are so many to choose from -.-
As you can see, I settled for one (after redoing the comic about 3 times). Thank god it hit when it did xP
So here is what you (the viewer) can do: COMMENT
I would like your comments, on how much you like this comic, how much you hate it, if I misspelled something, anything; just comment. It's not that hard, is it? I did all the hard work, all you have to do is click in the comment box and type away; It's that simple!
But seriously, please comment, especially if it's helpful.
Comments > Favs+
If you comment (and like the comic) I'll go out of my way and give you an update when the next page is out, that way everyone wins
That is all.
Pinkie pie belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust
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Comments: 20
marshadow-x [2021-04-20 05:44:27 +0000 UTC]
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prometheushunter2 [2018-08-01 21:19:25 +0000 UTC]
My recommendation is containment through medically induced coma, a constant IV drop of 100% insulin should do it
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COMMANDER9 [2013-05-17 04:53:37 +0000 UTC]
You missed 22/23 times?
Your marksmen skills must really suck then.
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quadren4 In reply to COMMANDER9 [2013-05-17 21:43:50 +0000 UTC]
Well, Pinkie was moving EXTREMELY fast, and some other stuff. I'll get to that at a latter point in the comic, but not now (like a few pages or something).
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Brother-Malachai In reply to quadren4 [2013-06-04 01:20:08 +0000 UTC]
Y Pinkie kill ppl? Is she making Cupcakes?
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hgfggg In reply to quadren4 [2012-09-02 17:58:37 +0000 UTC]
You don't know about that? Look it up on SCP.
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hgfggg In reply to quadren4 [2012-09-02 21:59:57 +0000 UTC]
Just the words "Are we cool yet".
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quadren4 In reply to hgfggg [2012-09-03 05:47:32 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, interesting SCP, not as creepy as I want it to be...
but it's still....
...Cool.
YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
xP
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Shadowmov3r [2012-08-10 20:19:31 +0000 UTC]
Interesting, I'd love to know what's going to happen.
Some things I've noticed are that Pinkie's neck looks a bit on the long side and the brown guy's fingers are a bit out of proportion in the fifth panel. Nothing else to add, love the shading and the style!
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quadren4 In reply to Shadowmov3r [2012-08-11 03:14:05 +0000 UTC]
Pinkie's neck too long? Yea, now that you mention it, it is a little long xP. I'll try not to make the same mistake on the next pages. As for the fingers...... yea...... I'm not a expert at drawing hands xP I'll try to get better at that, but there is no guarantee that I'll become a professional at that; I will try though
I like how you called him a "brown guy" I just caught that xD
Guess you have to stick around to know what happens next >:-D
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Fyresale [2012-08-06 13:31:35 +0000 UTC]
This is actually looking pretty interesting so far. It looks like you're choosing to steadily progress the story through a more-or-less detailed plot, instead of jumping directly into the action. That was a pretty good decision in my opinion.
I like the visual style that you decided to use here as well. As Larsurus previously mentioned, the shading is a very nice touch.
So, what do you think is planned for future installments? More analysis? Perhaps sending a Class D inside? My curiosity is piqued.
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quadren4 In reply to Fyresale [2012-08-06 20:38:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Glad you're interesting in the story
Yea, I didn't really see much to gain from "starting right in the middle of the action;" I like to include some back story, before jumping into the action. I don't even think any real action will happen 4 to 6 pages from now xP.
I am guessing that my art style that I choose is good xP It was the thing that I spent the most time on
What's coming in the next installments? A interview with Pinkie, maybe a analysis, Twilight coming to play, containment breach; That sort a stuff.
For me, this is actually an experiment of sorts: I want to see if can create a good, some what successful comic.
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Larsurus [2012-08-05 22:11:10 +0000 UTC]
Very nice I love the shading.
Though I personally would be a bit careful adding known SCP characters (Dr.Gears), seeing as they are peoples "OC's", aswell as real persons. Unless you got permission ofc.
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Barefoot-Panda In reply to Larsurus [2012-08-06 05:42:11 +0000 UTC]
My opinion would be that this falls under the same notion of fanfic and fair use that allows him to use Pinkie pie who is a licensed character. Just saying.
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quadren4 In reply to Larsurus [2012-08-06 02:19:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Like the shading as well xP
I didn't really think about asking for permission to use Dr.Gears
I thought he was just a character I could use without permission.
.....Only problem is, I don't know where to go, in order to ask for permission D:
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Larsurus In reply to quadren4 [2012-08-06 18:42:34 +0000 UTC]
Well I can't say that it is right or wrong, just my personal opinion. I really don't know if there are any "rules", so to speak. Also read what Barefoot wrote above.
Keep drawing!
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