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Slowly fading into darknessWhile trying to find the light.
Thinking God would take pity
On my narcissistic plight.
Left alone in a broken world
To find meaning in my life.
How can I find peace in this place,
Through all my pain and strife?
I'm hurt beyond belief
And I always feel despair.
Friends try to ease my grief,
But it's like they aren't there.
My past comes back to haunt me
When I've finally forgotten.
It can make a perfect day
Just seem perfectly rotten.
Why taunt me in this way?
It's not kind or even fair.
Life's not fair they always say,
It's as though you do not care.
"Why have you forsaken me?"
Your son said on his cross.
If you turned your back on your son,
Then my only hope is lost.
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Comments: 15
AmandaMache [2011-12-19 02:23:47 +0000 UTC]
o_o
Oh my goodness. That's...depressing.
Hopefully you don't feel that way anymore? Haha
It's really deep though. I like it but it makes me sad.
I really like the way you write.
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quicksta4 In reply to AmandaMache [2011-12-26 04:01:48 +0000 UTC]
Hey, sorry I haven't been on here since before Christmas break. But no, I don't feel that way any more, I'm actually quite happy now and thank you
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AmandaMache In reply to quicksta4 [2011-12-26 04:32:00 +0000 UTC]
Well that's good and you're welcome!
P.S. Thanks for the watch haha
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quicksta4 In reply to AmandaMache [2011-12-26 04:33:21 +0000 UTC]
Of course I didn't even realize you were on DA until you commented on my poem, lol
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AmandaMache In reply to quicksta4 [2011-12-26 04:37:39 +0000 UTC]
Know what? I didn't even realize you were on DA until I was creeping around on *SEZwho 's profile and...I don't even know how I found you haha but I saw your picture and I was like I KNOW THAT GUY! haha
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SEZwho In reply to quicksta4 [2011-12-06 18:03:59 +0000 UTC]
You need to see where the comment was written to understand the context.
Or did you do that? >>
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quicksta4 In reply to SEZwho [2011-12-06 18:05:06 +0000 UTC]
I did that lol. It kinda shows up in the message inbox. but once again, what?
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SEZwho In reply to quicksta4 [2011-12-06 18:09:34 +0000 UTC]
I know it does. Just gotta keep track of where it's coming from.
I was just commenting
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