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The white lipped maidenDevoured the moon
Before our very eyes,
And I stopped…
Confused and scared,
Lost in the moment.
Desire slowly seeping
Through hidden layers
Of my soul…
And All I need...
Is you...
The wind whispers—
In silence of the future,
And my ears catch…
Muffled sounds,
A flash, a glimpse,
Of what waits…
Windows down,
An open road,
Green surrounds our path,
Slowly swaying,
But we move to fast,
To note the movement.
And white clouds
Put patches in
A blue October sky,
It could be day…
It could be like this…
But this night shines bright,
As I lay beside you,
With man made rain
Spouting from the ground,
It’s all around us…
And this…
This is what I’m living for…
To dream each night,
Of what future travels wait...
And all I need...
Is you...
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Comments: 3
Anonymouseur [2007-07-26 20:44:56 +0000 UTC]
A wonderful poem.
Just commenting to notify you (if you're not aware already) that the title has been cut off to Premonition: Riding In the Bea. Anyways, a wonderful poem.
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Quotation In reply to Anonymouseur [2007-07-27 00:26:56 +0000 UTC]
I'm aware... DA doesn't give me enought room to fit my titles in, half of the time so I post them like that and then leave the full title in the artist's comments box. Thank you though!
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Th3-F4ll3n [2007-07-25 14:44:04 +0000 UTC]
Wo'...I love it. I feel to still from the poem to write alot; I can't note any real flaws in it. It's very powerful; I love it.
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