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QwithoutaU — Last Sentence Inked In Red
Published: 2006-08-22 04:07:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 275; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Desperation.This is my final plea.
I'd fall from third story windows
If I thought you'd be there to see it.
Through the shatter glass and
Splintered wood, I'd fly from this cell
And land in the hole you've made my bed.
Appreciate me.
Learn to reach for what you see.
I'm not the enemy-
The only poison you'll ever need.
Devestate me.
You should've stayed-
But that was more than you could take,
Then you gave your head a shake,
Before you turned around to leave....
So here it is, the event of the season.
Failure in success with very little reason-
Commit this to the memories
Of you and me, on our beach
With sand stuck in our toes,
Our boddies lined in rows,
And here it goes-
Appreciate me.
Learn to reach for what you see.
I'm not the enemy-
The only poison you'll ever need.
Devestate me.
You should've stayed-
But that was more than you could take,
Then you gave your head a shake,
Before you turned around to leave....
Appreciate me.
Learn to reach for what you see.
I'm not the enemy-
The only poison you'll ever need.
Devestate me.
You should've stayed-
But that was more than you could take,
Then you gave your head a shake,
Before you turned around to leave....
And I'd smile, and say-
Goodbye, and I still love you.
Though I know that I'm above you,
I'd cut my legs off (No one will notice)
I'd lay beneath you (Did you know this?)
You should've stayed
You should've stayed
You should've stayed
You should've stayed
You should've stayed
Appreciate me.
Learn to reach for what you see.
I'm not the enemy-
The only poison you'll ever need.
Devestate me.
You should've stayed-
But that was more than you could take,
Then you gave your head a shake,
Before you turned around to leave....
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Comments: 13
"So here it is, the event of the season.
Failure in success with very little reason-"
i loved that line the most. we are totally writing a song together.
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I KNOWWWWWWWWW! Now get yourself on MSN, silly.
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This was made to read outloud. If anyone hasn't read it aloud, then do it because it enhances every syllable.
And believe me, I adore every syllable of this.
You are the only writer who I can say touches me with everything you write. And though I may not understand everything, something about it touches me. Whether it just be a few word, a fews lines, verses or the whole thing. You reflect emotion off every letter.
Then you gave your head a shake,
Before you turned around to leave....
And so beautiful in the simplicity - and yet the emotion is far from that.
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I've kept this comment in my archives for months.....not sure of how to reply, or of when I'd actually do it. You write the most meaningful, incredible comments of all I've recieved, and they move me to continue doing what I do. I greatly appreciate any and all feedback you've ever given me, and hopefully, I'll be seeing a lot more of you!
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Nicely done. When do you plan to give us some music with these lyrics?
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Very emo, but that's what I am, so you cater to my own personality. Excellent job!
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Lol....yay to catering!
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Very wonderful. Glad to see some worthwhile writing from somebody again. Beautiful.
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Okay, I'm this close || to grabbing my guitar and starting a revolution here... I SWEAR! This close || <---- the size of the gap in those two lines, that close. Ofcourse then, I'd be a pathetic loser who made a song with another person's lyrics, but SOMEONE has to, these lyrics are too great to not be made into full songs T_T
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