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WARNING: SPOILERS FOR RECENT NARUTO CHAPTERS! (Up to 440)All That’s Left.
Rubble crunched loudly under Sasuke’s sandalled feet, the teen slowly making his way through the destroyed remains of what used to be his village. Dark eyes scanned the bodies littering the area, emotions flickering across the Uchiha’s smooth features when his eyes caught people he knew. He did his best to ignore the sensations those particular faces brought along with them.
There were really only three people in total he refused to find in the rubble, and if he did, Madara was going to suffer once Sasuke was done with Pein. So far so good, though, because the more he walked along, the less he recognized the people he was passing. It was almost as if a line had been drawn between the people he knew, and those he didn’t.
He was positive that Naruto had survived—after all, Tsunade wouldn’t have gone as crazy as she had to escape if Naruto had died—but Sakura and Kakashi he was still unsure about. As much as he liked pretending to be a heartless bastard, he still had one pumping blood throughout his body.
The rest of his team had opted to come with him, but he’d decided against that. He didn’t want them seeing him in his home—what used to be his home. Especially if one of his three important people had been killed. He wanted to be alone for that.
His eyes caught sight of Shizune, and he winced, turning his face away quickly and schooling it back into its indifferent mask. He didn’t know the woman, but he knew what she meant to Tsunade.
What she meant to Naruto.
He wondered how many more important people the blond had lost during this fight. How many he himself had, as well.
Doesn’t look like anyone important has died, he thought to himself, not bothering to add that he meant no one important to him. Because many people had certainly died at the hands of Pein. People who were equivalent to his loved ones to others. The man lying dead on his right was someone’s Naruto. Shizune was Tsunade’s Sakura.
So many lives had met their end, but Sasuke couldn’t find himself caring enough, because as long as none of them were his loved ones, he didn’t really care. He was heartless and selfish that way, and it wasn’t a secret.
Sasuke stopped near the center of the village, looking around dispassionately at the carnage. “Time to head back.” His monotone voice carried loudly on the wind, and he turned to move back the way he’d come when someone in particular caught his eye. He stopped, staring at Akimichi Chouza as the man lay dead in the middle of a pile of rubble.
Dark eyes stared at the figure, guilt flooding his system even though he hadn’t been present. Even though it hadn’t been him who’d killed his once-upon-a-time friend’s father. Still, he was part of the group who had, and that made him—in some respect—guilty.
Moving forward towards the man’s body to pay him some respect—he had known the man, after all—something caught his attention in his peripheral. His head whipped to the left, eyes zeroing in on a mesh of blood-stained grey hair.
Sasuke’s heart thudded to a halt in his chest. No... No, it’s not—it’s not him. It’s someone who looks similar. It’s not Kakashi, I’m overreacting. His feet began to move towards the body instantly, his previous trajectory towards Chouza completely forgotten. He ran the last few steps, falling to his knees and grabbing a fistful of the other’s hair.
He wrenched the person’s head up.
All the blood drained from his face when his gaze locked with two clouded, mismatched eyes. Kakashi had been dead for some time, of that he was certain. And nobody had even bothered to come and get him!
The logical part of his brain tried to remind Sasuke that many of the dead had been left behind in favour of protecting Naruto—even Chouji’s father—but he ignored it, rage and indescribable agony flooding his system. He immediately began pulling at the rocks around his sensei, hurling them away angrily, causing nails to break and pull painfully at the skin. He didn’t care, he ignored the pain in his hands, because it was nowhere near as potent as the one in his chest.
The Uchiha got most of the rubble away and then grabbed Kakashi under the arms, struggling to pull him out. He’d been dead too long, his body had gone entirely rigid. Sasuke couldn’t get him out.
He yanked harder anyway, feeling tears in his eyes. “No! No!!” The words forced themselves past his lips. “You’re Kakashi! You’re fucking Hatake Kakashi! You’re not allowed to fucking die!”
Giving up, he let the other fall from his grasp and fell back onto his knees, grabbing the front of Kakashi’s shirt and burying his face in it, tears slowly falling down his cheeks. The other’s clothing reeked of blood, but Sasuke didn’t care. He couldn’t care. Not about anything except the fact that his sensei was dead.
There were only three people who were never allowed to die. Ever.
Uzumaki Naruto.
Haruno Sakura.
And Hatake Kakashi.
His list had gone down to two. And now, Madara and Pein were going to pay for robbing him of his precious person. Nobody fucked with an Uchiha’s family.
They were going to learn that the hard way.
END.
Comments: 28
sakunae [2010-08-31 14:36:14 +0000 UTC]
Anyways HELL YEAHZ SASUKE
WHY CAN"T YOU REALIZE B.E.F.O.R.E THEY DIE!!!!!
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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to sakunae [2010-09-08 03:21:20 +0000 UTC]
Because he's not very bright for a genius? |D
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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to sakunae [2010-09-08 03:21:38 +0000 UTC]
No, this was just a random one-shot I wrote when it looked like Kakashi had kicked the bucket |D
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sakunae In reply to sakunae [2010-08-31 14:34:59 +0000 UTC]
Ignore what i said i read the comments....
sad
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Canis-Lupis-Alice [2009-06-25 22:46:19 +0000 UTC]
You've done it again!! how do you do it?! No matter how I try I can't fully capture the characters feelings when I write. You are a truly remarkable writer, I bow to your abilities.
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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to Canis-Lupis-Alice [2009-07-23 00:11:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much I'm sure you're just underestimating yourself
Give yourself a little more credit ^^
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Canis-Lupis-Alice In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2009-08-05 08:56:22 +0000 UTC]
I'll try. thanks. I'm looking forward to more of your work.
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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to Mehay [2009-07-23 00:12:16 +0000 UTC]
-picks up off the ground cause it's dirty there and drags along to come have juice with- <3
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ChikaraDesu [2009-03-27 15:15:45 +0000 UTC]
OMG!!! so sad!
a little confusing at the aprt with the tsunade's sakura and that, but other than that it was just.. sad?
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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to ChikaraDesu [2009-07-23 00:12:38 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thanks It was meant to be sad
I hope it was enjoyed, though
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ChikaraDesu In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2009-07-23 20:28:43 +0000 UTC]
very enjoyed <3 thank you ^^
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ChinaLady26 [2009-03-27 01:46:29 +0000 UTC]
A-Ano... *perks up hesitantly* will you do a sequel? Pleaseeeeee, onegai! *gives best puppy dog look* It. Was. Great. So Pleaseeeeeeeeee! Please x 10 to the millionth power!!! Rawr... *blinks before realizing how random that was* ^-^
<33NF
Nicole Fang
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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to ChinaLady26 [2009-07-23 00:13:12 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thank you kindly But no sequel
After Roommates, I started hating sequels, I rarely do them now
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ChinaLady26 In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2009-07-23 02:01:31 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I see I see. Sequels must be hard to keep on continuing huh? I wouldn't know right now, but maybe when I get more into writing lol.
After all the things you replied to you must think I'm spamming you, huh? Whoopsieee... I don't mean to, honest! I'm just hoping that some of your writing abilities will rub off on me... Heh, ignore that little bit...
Well, I'll support your one-shots and look forward to seeing you maybe update FTL (hinthintpushpushSHOVE). Not that you need to feel pressured or anything...
Okay, I'm going to shut up now. Bye.
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ORANGEnatchan [2009-03-26 22:23:29 +0000 UTC]
*sob* I love you so much!!
Anyways!! Keep writing more!! I love you!!
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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to ORANGEnatchan [2009-07-23 00:13:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you I'm glad you like my stuff :3
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HSBS [2009-03-26 14:52:15 +0000 UTC]
great visuals...not that i'd expect any less from you!
I wonder if Sasuke will come back anytime soon? (in the manga he has been missing from any mention for far too long)
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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to HSBS [2009-07-23 00:13:52 +0000 UTC]
Thanks That's so sweet of you :3
Well, this reply is super late so we've seen him around lately, but I'm interested in knowing how things work out :/
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HSBS In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2009-07-24 12:52:18 +0000 UTC]
oH GOD yeah! i love and hate the manga in a single heartbeat!
But without it where would we be?
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star-snatcher [2009-03-26 12:30:15 +0000 UTC]
Yet another wonderfully angsty fic from Sarge!
I applaud at your great writing skills and the ability to stir my almost non-existent feelings.
More please?
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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to star-snatcher [2009-07-23 00:14:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
Hahaha, I love that you enjoy when I stir your non-existent feelings haha <3 Thanks <3
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kittaepwns [2009-03-26 11:50:33 +0000 UTC]
NMDKSANGBEFJKNGRS
MOARMOARMOAR. D:
-got too into it-
Dx!!
It's so good!!
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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to kittaepwns [2009-07-23 00:14:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you hahaha. But no moar, sorry
<3
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