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Published: 2007-08-15 09:36:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1074; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 2
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Description Rain On Me.


Sora walked slowly down the street, his hands shoved deep into his pockets. He wasn’t headed anywhere in particular, he just needed to get out of the house.

That, and it was raining.

The brunette loved the rain. There was just something about it that always made him feel better. It was like every single drop that hit him became a means of washing away his worries or his sins.

He stopped near a small park and sat down on one of the swings, leaning his head back and closing his eyes so the water could run across his face.

He was already soaked to the bone, his jeans dark and heavy, and his shirt sticking to him like a second skin. His hair was matted across his face and along the back of his neck, but Sora didn’t really think about all that. He just focused on the rain.

He inhaled deeply, never having been able to describe the smell that accompanied rain, but always loving it. It erased all the unpleasant odors, like pollution and garbage, and just forced you to smell rain.

It was like the smell of freshly cut grass, only better. The smell of grass fades quickly, but rain—oh, no, rain lasts a lot longer.

Sora heard a clap of thunder and opened his eyes to stare up at the dark sky. He waited a few seconds until lightning lit up the sky, followed once again by thunder.

Everything about rain was so amazing, and mystical. Sora wished it rained all the time, but he figured that if it did, he probably wouldn’t appreciate it as much.

“Sora!”

He turned on the swing to see Riku running towards him with an umbrella. He had a look of half anger and half relief on his face, which Sora figured only Riku had the ability to pull off.

“What are you doing, you idiot?! You’re gonna catch your death out here!”

He reached Sora quickly and covered him with the umbrella, which Sora found to be particularly stupid since he was already soaked, anyway.

“I’m fine.” he insisted with a big, toothy grin. “I like the rain.”

“You’re still gonna get sick!” Riku insisted, annoyed. “You’re so stupid, sometimes, Sora! I’ve been worried about you! You’ve been gone for hours!”

“I was just enjoying the rain.”

Sora grinned and snatched the umbrella out of Riku’s hand, closing it before leaping off the swing and running. Cursing the fact that his clothes were now wet, Riku chased after him, noticing how happy and playful Sora seemed.

The brunette threw the umbrella away, and instead of going after it, Riku tackled Sora around the middle, the two of them falling onto the wet grass. Riku landed on top of the smaller boy, both of them panting a little.

“You’re getting wet.” Sora teased.

“So are you.”

“No, I’m getting wetter.” He scowled a little. “And muddy. Rain, I like. Mud, not so much.”

Riku laughed, but made no move to get off Sora.

The brunette pouted, which caused the older boy to lean down and kiss the pout away.

“Mm, I like this. Kissing in the rain.” Riku grinned.

“Covered in mud.”

“That’s you, I’m not cove—” He let out a startled cry as Sora rolled over, changing their positions so that Riku’s back was now against the ground, mud staining his shirt. He looked at Sora, who was grinning, very unimpressed with the boy’s childishness.

“One of us dirty wasn’t bad enough?”

“I was returning the favor.” Sora leaned down and kissed his lips lightly.

The two of them continued to roll around in the mud until the rain stopped two hours later.


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Comments: 35

poetryscribbles [2009-01-03 16:16:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that was so adorable~ I like the rain, too. But I also like the mud, lol.

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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to poetryscribbles [2009-02-01 10:53:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it :3

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poetryscribbles In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2009-02-01 12:40:38 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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anexara [2007-11-24 08:45:34 +0000 UTC]

SQUEEL! ssssssssssssoooooooooooo cute! so unbearably cute! *more squeeling* really, REALLY good writing

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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to anexara [2007-11-25 08:18:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it

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anexara In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2007-11-25 22:12:29 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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NinjaAlchemisthXc [2007-09-19 21:19:29 +0000 UTC]

Aww, this was sweet. I personally love the rain so I totally got how Sora felt.
The mud... Doesn't bother me. Where I live we get muddy for fun so... Yeah.
Yeah, like I said. I loved this. 'Cause it was sweet. And I love that pairing.

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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to NinjaAlchemisthXc [2007-09-19 21:21:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very muchly I enjoy the rain on occasion, and I've never really had a horrible encounter with mud, as of yet, so... yeah, haha. Thanks again ^^

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rikuXamberforever [2007-08-28 08:03:54 +0000 UTC]

cute!!! i love it! so sweet!

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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to rikuXamberforever [2007-08-29 06:19:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very muchly ^^

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rikuXamberforever In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2007-08-29 19:47:25 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome!

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thewyteangel [2007-08-24 16:39:54 +0000 UTC]

it is more descriptive, and i like that but i wish more happened

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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to thewyteangel [2007-08-29 08:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yeah, I didn't want to make it TOO shounen-ai, I wanted to focus more on the rain But I'm glad you liked it anyway ^^

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thewyteangel In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2007-08-31 01:03:14 +0000 UTC]

that's cool! i love your fanfics

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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to thewyteangel [2007-08-31 09:09:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Okami-ttebayo [2007-08-18 20:34:12 +0000 UTC]

awww, sarge, it was so sweet!!! oh my god, gotta read also the other one right now!!!

it's adorable to imagine sora in the rain, it'd be really cute!! also, maybe it's a narcissism, but it reminds me of my piccie.

loved this one. my dear, i haven't spoke to you for so long!!

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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to Okami-ttebayo [2007-08-21 10:26:17 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks, I'm glad you liked it

Which piccie are you talking about? Link me

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Okami-ttebayo In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2007-08-23 20:25:13 +0000 UTC]

yeah, i did. :3 yay!!

it's just a scetch yet.. but here is it -> [link]

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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to Okami-ttebayo [2007-08-29 08:54:13 +0000 UTC]

Awww, it's cute! hurry, though, cause the contest ends on the 31st >.>

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Okami-ttebayo In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2007-09-06 07:41:36 +0000 UTC]

missed it! to hell with me and procrastinating at messages!! ><;;
thanks anyway.

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kakashigal [2007-08-18 14:24:15 +0000 UTC]

loved it!

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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to kakashigal [2007-08-21 10:30:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much

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kakashigal In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2007-08-21 22:41:23 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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eda1102 [2007-08-15 18:59:30 +0000 UTC]

omg! that's great!!
super squeeeel
sora wants to be seme! LOL
-FAVE

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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to eda1102 [2007-08-21 10:31:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Hehe, glad you liked it. And Sora doesn't necessarily want to be seme, he just wanted to pay Riku back for getting mud on his shirt

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eda1102 In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2007-08-21 11:28:18 +0000 UTC]

yeaahh.. "suree " no, seriously, I think he wanted ti be seme in that scene. He just wanted to look like a payback xDD;

and welcomed

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spazfroggie [2007-08-15 18:08:31 +0000 UTC]

Cute. ^^

PS: I thought you weren't gonna get sucked into this fandom?

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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to spazfroggie [2007-08-21 10:33:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks And I wasn't sucked in! I just wanted to enter kitten-chan's contest ^^

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spazfroggie In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2007-08-25 04:30:39 +0000 UTC]

O, i c.

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shinju-kun [2007-08-15 17:34:20 +0000 UTC]

how sweet. i'm like sora in this: i love the rain. mud, not so much.

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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to shinju-kun [2007-08-21 10:34:05 +0000 UTC]

Haha, it's true Mud is icky. Thanks ^^

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shinju-kun In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2007-08-21 13:32:41 +0000 UTC]

welcum! ^^

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Blue-Feather-BF [2007-08-15 11:19:30 +0000 UTC]

Knyaawww~ That was so sweeet =^w^= You brought out their personality perfectly, and the rain was described in detail. I was surprised Sora didn't strucked by lightning he's very lucky
YAY! Hope you win the contest! <33333333

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r3b3lliousr3b3l In reply to Blue-Feather-BF [2007-08-21 10:37:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the encouragement :3

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Blue-Feather-BF In reply to r3b3lliousr3b3l [2007-08-21 12:55:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ~
=]

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