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Description Name: Hayir Dengesi

Age: 29

Meaning: No balance

Personality: He is horribly bipolar and adding the insatible blood lust he harbors its hard for people to see him as a person. He often Practiced to act 'sane' and managable in the eyes of other people so much to the point that they wouldnt accuse him of destroying anything. or hurting anyone, they would even think that he was incapable to even do it since he would always note that he cant go far since he has ony a hand on his right shoulder, no arm and is lacking a left leg. despite is insane exterior hes cold, broken, cruel to the point of murdering newborn babies while laughing and in a way, calculating despite his methods being seemingly out of left field, they actually relate.

Looks: Has a mechanical eye on the left side of his face that moves around and doubles as a lazer that makes opponents hallucinate massively as well as throw them around, the right side of his face is burned and has his natural eye with a black iris and a white pupil making it seem like broken black glass. His body is gaunt but ninja-like, meant for extreme presision, velocity and grace despite missing a left leg and left arm. He wears a series of small but dense weights on his body like armor to weigh it down and protect it but he often breaks these during fights on purpose. He wears a plad black undershirt almost like a wife beater as well as a pair of white jeans, wrapping the otherleg around his waist, his sword placed behind his waist in quick easy reach of his right arm.

Belief: he doesnt trust machines unless for traveling and even then hes skeptical, if given food he doesnt eat or makes someone else eat it first, if his 'prey' (he calls the people hes supposed to kill) plays dead/ is dead cut their heads off any fricking way or explode/burn them.

Homeplanet: He only remembers that he destroyed it singlehandedly, doesnt want to remember anything else about it. ( the entire planet, he was regarded as a freak and an abomination because of how he was born and he killed every man, woman, child, animal and plant using a third of his life to do it and succeding, leaving the planet a bare moon)

Skills and strengths:

-A spirtitually reinforced will so much to the point that only death could touch and kill him if he allowed it through near mental, physical, spiritual, and emotional training to the point where he almost became a sub species of his own race (which he is the last of).

- Superior swordsmanship

-Expert idealist, strategist, and socialist

-Can easily make people think he can be tricked or tracked.

-Can quickly twist problems for himself into problems for his opponent making it a 'if you take me down, you die with me' scenario with a iceberg's chance in hell of escaping.

-Powers over fire (through his twisted aura and soul from his hate) and can conduct a purifying fire that leaves a planet a barren moon in hours.

- Can shapeshift into a tiger or a small kitten form either to decieve others, hide or just be comfortable as well as be wild in the streets.

Weaknesses and Faults:

- Is highly unpredctable.

- Has no care for his teammates if hes put in a team

-Will backstab those hes working with (Despite compsenating them later on)

-Will act as a hero for some reasons he made up or no reason at all

-Is a pervert, a very extroverted pervert (And he will let you know this if asked)

- his birth defects
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Comments: 1424

rabbit-chainsaw In reply to ??? [2014-06-25 13:11:11 +0000 UTC]

Woooot! i cant wait for all of it! :3 thank u 4 this brother!

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2014-06-25 13:40:56 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2014-06-25 13:44:17 +0000 UTC]

Is it bad i cant wait for the rest?

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2014-06-25 13:47:36 +0000 UTC]

Nope.

Just don't get to hyped up that is all.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2014-06-25 14:30:25 +0000 UTC]

I get a little hype reading your stuff anyway bro. And add that my character in in your literature. You can understand cant u?

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2014-06-25 14:35:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I can.

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Carrie-Kube [2013-10-16 21:49:47 +0000 UTC]

So this was what Hayir was like in his early days.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to Carrie-Kube [2013-10-16 23:36:15 +0000 UTC]

in another universe but sure you can say that too.

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RobinLightwalker [2013-04-21 13:19:38 +0000 UTC]

Scorpion pressed the switch for her and she returned to her cat form again. Scorpion looked at the switch. Then at Caroline,then back the switch. The switch was sending out red bolts and sparks already.
- Could it be.....?Scorpion said to himself,then he kneeled down and rolled the switch back to Caroline,when it toutched her paws something happend.

- Last one.The switch announced.
Theme: [link]
The silver top of the swithc swirrled around and dark energy spirreld and emitted from the switch. The button on the top of the switch spun around and then stopped,it was at the exact same place and posistion as the button on Horoscope switch. The silver area around the switch was no longer silver and now glowed in a faint red light with blood red vains all over the top,coming from the switch. It looked like an eye. An eye where the pupil either was the switch,or the switch had imaplled the eye. The bottom of the switch had changed,the middle of the switch had thined down and around the fully filled eye in the middle several small spikes had appeared and where judding out. The top and bottom circle had also been spiked.
- You want nothing now do you little cat? Press the switch now and you will get nothing.You will feel nothing. Nothing will happen.Scorpion said as he forced the switch into Caroline's paws.
- Just a simple push and nothing is what you will care about. Scorpion said and helped Caroline's paws to the button.Scorpion then stepped back a bit.
- I DON'T WANT ANYTHING!!!!!!Caroline snapped and pushed the button in rage.


Caroline then exploded into an even bigger explosion of darkness then a usual Zodiart transofrmation. The sillhouet of Lynz apparead,together with the constellation. One of the stars shined red,then the stars went into silhouet and transformed into Lynx. Caroline's body was pushed out of the body,not moving,not making a sound,not doing anything and her cat body was completely webbed up in a strange web. The switch instead went into the Zodiart body and took the body's place.
- You don't care about familiy. You have something.But you want to have nothing. Kill them. Scorpion ordered the Lynx Zodiart as he picked up Caroline's webbed up body. Lynx groweld,then started to run on all four. The stars in the constellation of Lynx now glowed golden.


In the meantime, Adam had left Everett in thier familiy room. All Everett had been doing was to stare at his switch. Then the door opend and Adam stepped in,holding a bunch of papers.
- Okay dad.Want to help me find out who the Cancer Horoscope is and who the Scorpion Horoscope is so that we know who betrayed us? Adam said and throwed Everett two photos. One of Cancer and one of Scorpion. Both taken through security cameras.
- When we do figur eout who they are. Let's stop them. Adam said and took up his Orion switch.
- Last one....the switch announced and tranformed so that it looked like Caroline's switch had done when it also entered Last one. Both Everett and Adam looked up and looked at the radiclly changed switch and what it had said.
- Dad does not look good and that did seriously not sound good. Everett said and stepped up and walked forward to Adam.
- Daaaad....I think this sweething is starting to run out of juice or something.Adam said worried.
- Then there is even more of a motivation to find Scorpion or Cancer.You need a new switch. Everett said,then he looked back to the two photos. Adam had a hard time to pull his eyes away from his switch.


- That was unexpected.But it works. Cancer said to Scorpion as they both held a firm grip around Lynx to keep it under control.
- Orion is ready. Now we just need to wait for the right moment. Scorpion said scheming.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-21 14:17:14 +0000 UTC]

"And protecting me son, be Careful with that and use what little of yourself you have in thought." Everett says,"Considering we need to find your mom, our wife."

He runs on his fours following Caroline's scent.

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-21 15:00:53 +0000 UTC]

Everett only find small remains of a strange web at the place where the scent was emitting from. But after having smelled the web,Everett was able to trace the scent.

To a garbadge can where cat Caroline lied tied up and almost half mummy or coconifed by a strange web,not moving or struggling a single bit. She didn't smell dead,she smelled,empty.

Everett lifted Caroline's body from the trash and tried to get rid of the web,but the web only renewed itself. Keeping the lifeless body confidend it web.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-21 15:22:09 +0000 UTC]

"So lifeless, and he was so adamant..." Everett shook his head,"And he was too distracted..." he held Caroline lovingly and close as..

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-21 15:33:33 +0000 UTC]

Adam was preparing thier brain storming section to figure out who was Cancer and who was Scorpion. He didn't know what had happend to his mother.Adam was worried over the state that his switch was in.


(Neither Milton(Any of them),Everett or Adam knows what happends at Last one)(Everett is starting to make guesses.Nor he or Adam knew that Caroline had gotten a switch)

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-21 15:55:08 +0000 UTC]

(Doesn't insinuate that.)

"Adam, come here."Everett yelled as he was right outside the door. Holding Caroline in his arms.

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-21 16:07:10 +0000 UTC]

- What happend to mother? Adam said shocked,broken,shattered,woken up mostly.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-21 16:16:52 +0000 UTC]

"A possible idea of what could happen to us." Everett growls peering at Adam's switch and then at Adam, "We should stop looking for who scorpion and cancer are, they are the ones who left the light in shambles in the first place, its that obvious that factor is usless information now. They know everyone here, thats why they are going around willy nilly as they please. If you were actually doing your job, you are supposed to be preventing that, that is a factor in protecting everyone. What you want." Everett growls coldly, icy fire coming from his breath.

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-21 16:48:39 +0000 UTC]

Before Adam could answer that question a deep,blood freezing,gurgling growl came from behind Adam and Everett,outside the room. On the other side of the room.
- NOTHING!!!!!A warped,growling voice yelled to Everett.
- I will click,you won't. Everett said and took up his switch,then he pressed it. After the click and some darkness and stars, he was Fornax again.

Fornax preered open the door and was greated by a howling,growling and scowling Lynx Zodiart together with a Cancer and Scorpion Horoscope.

The voice of Lynx had been to warped to be fully recongniced by Adam or Everett.
- NOTHING!!!!!!Lynx yelled again and took out its claws.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-21 16:53:01 +0000 UTC]

"Hello my angel." Fornax whispers as his flames rush from his right fist, face and chest beforr charging at lynx,"Seems like I need to burn you.."

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-21 20:48:58 +0000 UTC]

(Now who is that dosen't make any sense?Neither Everett,Adam or Milton knew that Caroline had a switch or was a Zodiart and Everett wasn't that sure that whitch had happend to Caroline was what would happen to them.)

Lynx immediatly clawed back and its claws cut through the armor and scraped it and cut through it really badly. Lynz jumped up into the air and smashed and clawed Fornax with both the front and back paws and it's tail and jumped over Fornax,violently kicking and clawing him.
- Mom!Is that you!?Adam said shocked and quickly took up his switch. The two Horoscopes saw the state Adam's switch was in. Scorpion's stinger got active again and surged towards Fornax and Adam,but instead of stinging them,it went right past them and grabbed hold of Caroline's body,then pulled it to Scorpion,who grabbed hold of Caroline's lifeless webbed up body.
- Caroline,you have no familiy. These people shouldn't desserve to live if they don't mean anything to you. Scorpion said venomusly to Lynx and Lynx clawed and ripped towards Adam and Fornax,who jumped away from Lynx. Both where shattered when they heard what Scorpion said.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-21 21:15:29 +0000 UTC]

"Her son and her husband should mean something to her, you twisted and perverted her even further!" Fornax roared as his flames turned the whitest hot from his anger as his armor was shaking, the flames starting to heal the armor before Fornax swelled out and his armor became like shrapnel smashing into lynx in a rapid full salvo. Parts of his armor attaching to her, and not falling off as if burned to her flesh.

*Its a guess, note 'possible' he said. and look up signs of demonic possession a sign is to have information that normally you shouldn't in your mind that you didn't learn or know about*

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-21 21:19:38 +0000 UTC]

(My favourit Kamen Rider series has both riders in the show get possed by "demons" and there,the "demons" have to tell thier hosts thiings that thier hosts did not know)

Lynx sliced through the shrapnal thrown at her and she groweld and roared like a lion at Fornax and Adam.
- M-m-m-m-Mom?!!!!......Adam said completely blubberly and shackely,his finger on the button.

- Cancer,hold Caroline for a moment. Scorpion said and handed Caroline's body to Cancer.After some reluctancy,the crab accepted the cat from the Scorpion.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-21 21:30:31 +0000 UTC]

Fornax's fists had avoided her claws and doubled back smashing into lynx and sending her into the furnace's chest as it was fully healed. The white hot armor's inside burning her flesh so badly it stunk and stuck to the armor. Her blood was evaporating with a rancid odor into the flames and as if they were being fed, they burned hotter and stronger the more she flailed and burned.

"Burn my angel, you shall burn for it is the only way now to clean you of their perversion... All of my angels need to burn... to be free of them." Fornax said cold as other parts of his armor reattached themselves to the chest and to their respective places, making the fire even worse, even stronger Lynx was yowling in agony as the armor kept getting hotter and hotter, so much the outside was glowing white all on its own brightly.

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-21 21:42:04 +0000 UTC]

Then it happend. Lynx couldn't take the power.

Fornax turned around,then opend his chest and let out a massive explosion towards Cancer and Scorpion,making Cancer drop Caroline's body who's webs catched a bit on fire. Both Scorpion and Cacner complained about the heat of the situation.

Fronax himself had a hard time handling the heat and pressed his switch to return to an overheated,sweating,gaspinga dn partly burning Everett. He burped up a Zodiart switch that looked just like Adam's switch currently did.Everett looked at Caroline.Still not any movement from her. Everett figured it out. Turn of the switch and all his problems would be solved. But just when his thumb toutched the button on the switch,the switch blasted Everett away from it with an explosion of darkness and forced Everett away from it. That grabbed the Horoscopes attention and all four gasped. Everett was to tired to transform into Fornax again at the moment,so he could only watch as the switch was emitting cosmic darkness from itself and flew in the air. The switch flew in the air by the cosmic energy and darkness and flew towards the fire that Fornax had spit out. Then it zoomed right into it and swirled around and litterly absrobed the fire that was what had defeated Lynx,was what Lynx had become and all the energy in it,then it exploded into darkness and the Lynx constellation appeared again,shinning golden,then the darkness expldoed furiously and then was replaced by golden energy,then the stars went into the powered up body and became a golden shinning Lynx,who roared by the immence power.
- She surpassed Last One!The Two Horoscopes said surpriced. Adam and Everett where just shocked and baffeld at what was happening. She didn't return to normal when the switch had been used for the last time. The star on her right uper torso had a folden ring around it now and it was the source of the sun like energy around Lynx that had revived.
- Now all she needs is The Star of Rebirth.Cancer giggeld. Scorpion spat out a green gas at Adam and Everett and when it cleared,all three where gone.Including Caroline's body.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-21 21:49:36 +0000 UTC]

"I should have burned her faster... further..." Everett whispered with bitterness and shame, "Now she is a pawn.. he starts to walk away"

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-22 05:26:40 +0000 UTC]

- I don't think that would have done it. Adam said solomly and looked at his switch.
- Why do they look after the Zodiarts that they create so mutch?Everett asked himself and Adam.


- What a great use of Fornax's powers. Scorpion said impressed.
- With how mutch power he used,that must have brough his uses up to half,yet the greatness of his demonic possesion and the complexity aswell as the fact that they are older then the ones inside Orion have made him less evolved then Orion. Cancer said as he held Lynx tightly.
- It will come,but we must not rush his particular evolotion to mutch. Scorpion said.
- I can almost taste the star of rebirth in Lynx at the moment. It is there,it just needs to be activated. Cancer said anxsious and looked at Lynx and tickeld her.
- I can almost smell that she will be a very powerfull apostel.He he he he he.Cancer said with glee.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-22 08:54:18 +0000 UTC]

Virgo smiles, *0"Well that would be the case... the irritating thingnis waiting. "

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-22 09:30:04 +0000 UTC]

- I smell water from that cat. Leo said and pushed his switch to return to Dark!Robin.
- Aquarisus?Tyson said as he became himself again after pushing the Virgo switch.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-22 10:14:07 +0000 UTC]

"That is just confusing..." Tyson says,"what does this mean?"

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-22 10:42:50 +0000 UTC]

- I will explain once Lynx's star of rebirth has been sparked. I can sense it....It is there.It has awaken.It wakes up when you surpas Last One,but it hasn't sparked yet. Lynx has more then enough to become the next of the twelve Earthly Apostels.Aquarius. Grey Cammolion said completely dull and monotoned as he watched the stary night sky.
- Scorpion.Cancer.Aries.Taurus.Leo.Virgo.Sagittarius. Those are the ones that are active. We are still missing a few Horoscopes. Dark!Robin explained to Tyson as he showed him his Leo switch.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-22 11:02:37 +0000 UTC]

"Who is missing?" Tyson asked curious.

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-22 11:48:23 +0000 UTC]

- Aquarius,Libra,Capricon,Pisces and Gemeni. Dark!Robin answered.
- Curroption is Aries. Environ is Taurus. You are Virgo. Robin is Leo. I am Sagittarius. ....... is Cancer. ........ is Scorpion and Lynx has the potentinal to become Aquarius. I sense a bit of a Libra in Fornax and a bit of Capricorn in Orion. Cammolion said with a dark monotone to Tyson while glaring at Tyson all while holding his Sagittarius switch.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-22 13:26:48 +0000 UTC]

Tyson nods understanding, "alright"

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-22 13:34:31 +0000 UTC]

- Whe Fornax and Orion has been completed. There will only be Gemeni and Pisces left. Then we have them all. Cammolion said freakishly cold.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-22 13:36:57 +0000 UTC]

Tyson nods understanding before he spoke, "who do you see Pisces and Gemini in?"

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-22 13:49:47 +0000 UTC]

- Milton. Cammolion answered.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-22 14:43:04 +0000 UTC]

"Wait... both constellations?"Tyson said confused. "Or just one of them. If its both then.. thats just insane.."

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-22 14:48:21 +0000 UTC]

- Two entities. One name. Two bodies. Two Horoscopes. Cammolion explained,still stuck in a dark and cold montone voice.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-22 15:00:34 +0000 UTC]

"Wouldn't that also mean twice the time?" Tyson asked.

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-22 15:24:23 +0000 UTC]

(What does Tyson mean by that?)

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-22 16:28:45 +0000 UTC]

(Twice the time considering th3y are talking about Milton as a whole despite having two parts to his being)

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-22 17:44:58 +0000 UTC]

- Two Horoscopes when devided. One when whole. Gemini. Cammolion said finishing and then promtly left.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-22 18:24:45 +0000 UTC]

"Ah." Tyson said with an understanding nod.

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-22 19:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Side change.

Everett had returned to his familiy room with Adam,who was being a bit blubberly at the lost of his mom aswell as his fear for sacrificing his humanity and body for the wrong thing or for nothing. Ife he would do it,he would do it for his mom. But right now,the lost of his mother made the boy a baby.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-22 20:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Everett had sat across from his son before he walked over and picked up his son cradling him in his arms and nuzzling him.

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-22 20:49:33 +0000 UTC]

- Scorpio and Cancer is probebly keeping Caroline cealed away or hidden somewhere. I guess it is time we try and figure out who they are now if we are going to try to free her and get your switch a few more uses. Everett said as he nuzzeld Adam,worried for his son,for himself and Caroline.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-23 04:42:47 +0000 UTC]

Adam purred, cuddlin his father back before....

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-23 05:29:42 +0000 UTC]

(please continue a bit by yourself)

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-23 10:18:16 +0000 UTC]

Milton (mind) was outside knocking on Adam's door.
"I need to speak with y8u!" Milton says.

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RobinLightwalker In reply to rabbit-chainsaw [2013-04-23 12:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Everett and Adam stopped nuzzling at the knock of the door and when they had calmed each others down,they opend the door and allowed Mind!Milton to enter.

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rabbit-chainsaw In reply to RobinLightwalker [2013-04-23 12:53:12 +0000 UTC]

"My body is walking." He says, worried,"Where is it."

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