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Rackiera — Breakthrough - Chapter 1 - Pg. 27
Published: 2014-06-18 00:15:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 2545; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 5
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After this page are some pages that I'm a bit unhappy with, so bear with me; this is kinda transitioning down at the moment.
In reality I'm nitpicking myself and everyone else finds the pages fine but eh, I'm my own worst critic. <.<
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Unfortunately no, but I can speak a little bit of German, otherwise I've only got English.
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Yes, I'm continuing the story. I update the comic every Tuesday, or at least, I try to. ^^
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Nice comics,you have a good draving style (sorry for my english).
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Thank you, I'm glad you think so! And your English is fine.
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Yeah, hopefully Iyress's idea there works!...whatever she's planning!
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I cant quite tell whats going on in the last page, but yeah. Awesome comic so far!
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Last page or panel? 
Thanks!
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xD Yeah, then it's what I said - taking the bandage off
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That's Nezrik! I wonder what he's going to do though.
In the last panel you forgot to add the continuation of the paw, it looks like Nezrik uses fanthom fingers
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Yep! 
Oh crap you're right. Magic! I'll fix that asap. Thanks!
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I think you're doing a fine job with your pages! I especially like your shading style~
Just wondering what the guard is doing in the last panel though?
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Naww thanks, I'm glad to hear
He's taking off the 'bandage' that he's wearing in the previous panels - he's the red one shown there, not the green. It's a bit hard to notice.
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Ohh the bandage he has on his muzzle? I wonder what for~
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