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Into the Rainbow Factory; a MLP, D.C.R., and Rainbow Factory Crossover!Deciding to go back and fix some of the covers i've made in the past. Lets start with the first pony related story I ever wrote: Into the Rainbow Factory. A story that took me over a year to write between it being one of the longest stories i've ever written and a lot of procrastinating. I'm still not okay with the ending of it, so section 10 may get periodic updates. As a matter of fact the whole story keeps getting grammar and style updates as I've grown as a writer. So it may look a bit bad now, but in the future it may look better.
Don't forget to check out the OMFG awesome "reviews" from in the comments below each section. He does a good job summarizing each section, and adding some of his own interpretation of the events as they unfold.
Into the Rainbow Factory Section 1
Into the Rainbow Factory Section 2
Into the Rainbow Factory Section 3
Into the Rainbow Factory Section 4
Into the Rainbow Factory Section 5
Into the Rainbow Factory Section 6
Into the Rainbow Factory Section 7
Into the Rainbow Factory Section 8
Into the Rainbow Factory Section 9
Into the Rainbow Factory Sec. 10
Read it on FIMFiction !
MLP © Hasbro Inc
Rainbow Factory © Aurora Dawn
D.C.R. © Me
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Comments: 6
Well how about that, I was just thinking of our little talks
(get the reference? 
Was thinking of more ways to update my fic for your rnjoyment but you beat me again to the post.... Turns out I finally got a renewed vigor ...
Wow, that is an even more menacing pic- looks something like a possession or manifestation of some serious dark power born of critically fueled cruelty
I never told you about how I don't like suffering to ever be a teacher- it wounds the spirit forever like a scar on the heart will impeed it's function forever
Innocence is not always a good thing (ignorance and inexperience) in survival
But it is beyond precious for life and joy in it...
C4 abstaines from showing things like this to who he wishes to protect because he doesn't want them to be like him - he is unworthy in the presence of their natural light
But of course he won't indulge fallacy either- understand the disease to counter act it, which is why he has heard pleanty of diabolical plots, some based in truth and only coming down to opinion and desire...
And he chose to value lifes over power of "progress" ultimately
....
Looks like a red moon...
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honestly i almost feel like i havta mention you every time i do anything with ITRF, at least a quarter of its story line came from me thinking more deeply because of your "reviews". And I've enjoyed them as well.
I honestly can't wait to see if you're inclined to "review" the sequel to it. well, the sequel that contains Raptor. The current iteration of the Into series is just a filler. I hope to make the next one just as long as ITRF. Of course you don't have to, as i've always said, but i'll admit i look forward to them still.
And there'll be more twists and turns in IWSM as well. I hope to expand the universe further than just the scope of the Rainbow Factory, or Pinkie Pie's cellar, or Raptor's apartment on the Highrule. Lets just say, the universe, i hope, will feel much bigger.
As for the next part of your fic, i was beginning to wonder if i was gonna see another chapter or not. I may havta go re-read the old ones just so i can remember where you left off >.<
And what looks like a red moon? the burning in her eye? eh, i thought it looked like an explosion lol.
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Yes the pupil
And I give up, which one is IWSM?
I missed that one or I forgot xc
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Into the War of Sun and Moon
3rd installment of my Into series
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Wow... Dang
So the cupcake issue is a precursor or a side story leading into it
Well.... Problems arrise
And the details and means are where I either lend support or say "forget you" character wise
Naturally you probably could guess that
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The short cupcakes story happens 10 years after ITRF. Read it and it'll tell all 
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