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RadenWA — HO SHET ITS REALIZM

Published: 2010-07-17 14:02:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 2808; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 52
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Description So....hnurr, since it's very likely that my college'll have assignments to draw face potrait anytime soon, I randomly decided to try practicing those...and got hooked.

And there. My FIRST trial at realism potrait. Decided to do Arky, cos he's da man.
Added a chibi of him in my usual style just for comparison.

Mmmm...so does he look older than he should be? I planned him to be around age 17-18...
and one thing I sincerely regret: I forgot his MOTOCROSS GOGGLES!! But oh well, if I were to add any more detailed stuff on this, I might die anyways.

Hunh, can't win them all at the first try, I guess.

And you're free to say "Oh he looks like ... !!", but fyi, no references photos were used for this drawing. I peeked at the mirror a lot, tho >.>

PaintTool SAI.
Painting done in roughly 3-5 hours, cos I suck liek dat.

Art and Character: Arky Rayleigh, belongs to me.

Crit requested cos it still sucks in many ways. Parts I found disturbing are the neck, the left cheek, the eyes, the mouth and...uhh....everything else.
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Comments: 76

RadenWA In reply to ??? [2010-07-18 08:51:07 +0000 UTC]

The ears? That's the first time I heard...I'll check it out then ^^

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hi-im-bud In reply to RadenWA [2010-07-18 16:02:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah they look like they are in a side profile view. Trust me, I got a lot of crap from my instructors when drawing people, so I constantly look for those things.. >.>"

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meboeck [2010-07-17 15:08:23 +0000 UTC]

Your clothing detail has always been one of my favorite parts of your art, and you did it again! The jacket collar and zipper look awesome! I also really love the hair. There are definitely some things about the face that are off, but I'm not enough of a visual artist to know the specifics. Very nice job for your first try, though!

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RadenWA In reply to meboeck [2010-07-18 08:50:36 +0000 UTC]

yyyay! Gears be my specialty. Thanks!

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bensuit In reply to ??? [2010-07-17 14:47:11 +0000 UTC]

this is really good

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RadenWA In reply to bensuit [2010-07-17 14:48:37 +0000 UTC]

^^

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mdchan In reply to ??? [2010-07-17 14:36:06 +0000 UTC]

Holycrap, that's amazing! Specially the eyes and the hair...and the jacket. And the coloring, of course...looks almost 3-D.

The placement of the eyes is a bit off (spacing; the eye on the left side of the drawing should prolly be closer to the nose). Something looks strange with the mouth, but I can't quite figure out what.

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RadenWA In reply to mdchan [2010-07-17 14:46:51 +0000 UTC]

Yay, thanks much ^^

But it seems the eyes and mouth are just so wrong that everybody noticed it >.<

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mdchan In reply to RadenWA [2010-07-17 21:20:28 +0000 UTC]

XD
Least ya know what to fix for next time, though! It's harder to critique drawings where it's the tiny, itty-bitty details that someone hasta look for.

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TheEigthSinDeath In reply to ??? [2010-07-17 14:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, this is amazing. It's so realistic and great. Great job!

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RadenWA In reply to TheEigthSinDeath [2010-07-17 14:31:49 +0000 UTC]

Yay thanks! ^^

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Aetherya In reply to ??? [2010-07-17 14:10:30 +0000 UTC]

You did realism? Can't close my mouth.

One thing I immediately notice, though: I also see that his eyes are too far apart, and still somewhat manga-esque.

Other than that, this looks great. I'm digging that jacket right now

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RadenWA In reply to Aetherya [2010-07-17 14:34:42 +0000 UTC]

Well, if we really chose the path of the illustrator...one day...we can't avoid...we gonna face these.

Yep, the eyes. Thanks to how I actually started by using manga face skeleton anyways

Love that biking suit too <3 Even tho I did used my own leather jacket as reference for the collar~

Thanks, anyways

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Aetherya In reply to RadenWA [2010-07-17 15:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Realizm...

That collar does look hawt

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RadenWA In reply to Aetherya [2010-07-18 08:30:25 +0000 UTC]

My reaction when I first heard it, really. But hey, I tried it, and there I am

Leather always look hot, whatever it's used to

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Aetherya In reply to RadenWA [2010-07-18 14:20:43 +0000 UTC]

Yup yup

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Tikeyx In reply to ??? [2010-07-17 14:09:40 +0000 UTC]

OMG this is so cooool , your really a grate drawer

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RadenWA In reply to Tikeyx [2010-07-17 14:35:03 +0000 UTC]

Yay ^^

I wanna draw your face now

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Tikeyx In reply to RadenWA [2010-07-17 15:39:47 +0000 UTC]

lol dont >.>

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dinodude444 [2010-07-17 14:08:43 +0000 UTC]

I love it but I think the mouth looks kinda strange good job

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RadenWA In reply to dinodude444 [2010-07-17 14:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much. Yeah, still lots to fix

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dinodude444 In reply to RadenWA [2010-07-17 14:37:35 +0000 UTC]

ah dont worry if its your first try at doing sumthing like this it was very good

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darkstarsfire In reply to ??? [2010-07-17 14:04:48 +0000 UTC]

OMG REALISTICNESS!! :0 AWESOMEZ!

one thing i think, is that his eyes are a bit far apart but everything else looks really good :3 especially the hair!

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RadenWA In reply to darkstarsfire [2010-07-17 14:35:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, eyes! >.< Thanks anyways!

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darkstarsfire In reply to RadenWA [2010-07-18 01:49:27 +0000 UTC]

no problem! :3

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