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Published: 2013-05-25 22:43:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1257; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Ehhhh this was pretty fun xD So, another one of Rift, but now we've got his friend Tranquillity (Quill) in there ^^When I pictured this, it was supposed to be Rift with an outstretched paw, sorta shielding Quill from whatever they're staring down. But it ended out to be more of them running with Rift trying to keep her behind him.
Same concept though aha~!
Maybe at some point I'll make another one with the picture I had in mind x33
OH-
and if you were wondering, Quill's a cheetah/lioness hybrid ^^
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Comments: 28
woo never done a critique before.
first off, amazing expressions like wow. the eyes are gorgeous as well. i love the ears, a lot of people kinda tend to over look the ears but you did very well on them.
only things to improve on are your fur ruffles and your paws. the fur ruffles are a little long, and the paws are just a little too pointy. on Quill (love her name btw), her right (our left) paw is too tall and her left (our right) paw's "fingers" start too close to the wrist. also, the perspective on Rift's right (our left haha) paw is a little wonky. it should start out smaller by his shoulder and get bigger the closer it comes towards us. it's also a bit noodely in a sense, it needs more muscle definition and bone structure so it seems more sturdy...? ugh get what i'm saying? im pretty bad at explaining stuff haha. but amazing picture, you're really improving very fast! ^^
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Hey thanks a lot for the critique ^^ It was really helpful :3
I totally get what you're saying about Rift's leg x3
Ohh, and about the pointy paws, those are on purpose. I used to do the soft paws and they looked so bad xDD
Anyway, thank-you ^^
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no problem! n__n glad to help, sorry if it was like, worded stupidly or something haha =w=
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No I totally got what you were saying ^^
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Okay. CON:Light's eyes look a little funny and she is missing her amulet. I think thats Rift right? IDK but his nose looks kinda weird. And Light's ears look like a lions. Light's right fingers are kinda drawn funny PRO: OMG this is so beautiful i love this! The background is awesome. Rifts ( I think) eyes are really cool and Light's face/head is well drawn. I give this a 9/10 Stars. I could hve not drawn this like you its wonderful! Well I hope that this was a fair critique :3 -Emme OH and I love Rifts body. (And Light's) other than that is EPICLY EPIC
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o3o
Normally, I love constructive criticism, I mean obviously cause I asked.
Sorry, but this picture apparently went right over your head.
If you'd read the artist comments, you'd've seen that the characters are Rift and Quill, and they're supposed to be lions, and those are lions' paws. Also, Rift's nose is purposely designed like that, I didn't mess that up.
Light doesn't look a think like that anyway o-o
One last thing, you're basing this Rift off the little LPS toy, which doesn't look a thing like his real design.
I love critiques, they make me a better artist, but your's made no sense, sorry.
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I love your art soo much. You have some talent.And I am so sorry about Rose Petal.I had a dog once,but he was poisoned.
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Oh wow ;w; thank-you <33
Ugh that sucks, I'm so sorry ;w;
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This is magnicficent! I love the detail you put into it! <3
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This is beautiful!!!I i wish i could draw like that
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Thank-you :3 It's all practice and persistence ~ !
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Amazing! Every drawing you make keeps getting better and better <3
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omfg this is amaing
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you're improving suh much
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Thank-you so much ;w;
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hey i have points do you ever do commisions
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Yes commissions are open, what would you like? (:
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can you do a pic of Light and [link]
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I sent you a note ^u^
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