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RaeLogan — The Most Terrifying Sound

Published: 2012-06-21 02:58:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 7137; Favourites: 152; Downloads: 23
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Basically a scene from another fic I did... that collab one. This is a part that I put in, in which Mephiles manages to tick off Amy enough to meet Mr. Piko Piko Hammer. XD

More or less, she startled him enough that he fell off the dock, she pulled him out with her smaller hammer, got mad that he didn't thank her for that, compares him to Shadow (which already got her on his bad side...), and... well... read below...

The only reason he's not trying to kill her for that or anything is because there's people watching, and he's trying to keep a low profile... and smiting a certain pink hedgehog just might draw too much attention to him. XD

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"Are you sure? He's been running around all day, trying to save the princess from Dr. Eggman." She seems surprised. "That's Sonic for you, always helping everyone he can. I thought he might have come around this way, so I could wish him luck..."

"He didn't..."

"Well, that's not what everyone else said..." She muses. "I swear, today's been nothing but one crazy thing after another. First, Dr. Eggman shows up and kidnaps the princess, then Sonic saves her, and it happens again a few times, and then the hedgehog I was with turned out to be hunting Sonic..."

"What? Silver?" I say before I can stop myself.

"You know him?" She seems incredulous. "Wait... You're not hunting Sonic, too, are you?"

How in the name of Chaos did she come to that conclusion so fast? She establishes that I must know Silver, ergo I must be hunting Sonic because I know Silver? Am I the only one who can't make any sense of it? Please agree with me. I have to know.

She must have mistaken my bewilderment for hesitation. To further my suspicion of the short temper, she produces an even larger hammer out of thin air, and raises it above her head with both hands, looking quite livid.

Still trying to wrap my brain around this sudden turn of events, I raise my hands up in front of me, trying to convey that I was not a threat at the moment.

"I didn't say 'yes'..." I try to reason.

"But you didn't say 'no' either!"

She swings in down, narrowly missing me by hardly an inch. The hammer smashed through the wood on the docks, splintering pieces and making a rather unnerving crunching sound. She lifts it again.

"You're overreacting..." I say calmly, trying to not appear fazed by my near crushing. "Just put the hammer away..."

I almost don't see her strike this time, but a blur of movement makes me jump to the right, this time the hammer hitting the pavement, crushing the cement into powder beneath it.

I start to wonder just how heavy that thing really was, ducking out of the way again, splinters of wood and chips of paint from the guard railing in the upper level above me rained down on my quills as I held my hands over my head.

"You're making a scene..." I add, trying anything I could think of that wouldn't draw too much attention to get her to back off.

The hammer brushes against my nose as it buries itself into the steps by my side.

With how close it's come to hitting me, I start to wonder if her aim is really that bad, or is she mercilessly toying with me, like a sadistic predator?

Seeing that it was stuck between some steps, I take my chance and hurry down the sidewalk next to the water, and up the steps on that end. She pulls the hammer free and follows after me quickly, keeping a good enough distance that she could easily swing at me and hit my back. Why she had yet to, I'll never know...
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Comments: 22

Angel-Queen21 [2021-04-18 01:55:54 +0000 UTC]

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TrueLightningStriker [2019-04-26 01:17:14 +0000 UTC]

Well Mephiles, if you kill Sonic then Amy will toast you.

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rayquaza2828 [2015-06-10 02:15:08 +0000 UTC]

That is the most terror inflicting sound ever

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CoolHaze [2015-04-11 00:12:56 +0000 UTC]

poor Mephiles what did you do to upset Amy?

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Mephiles-the-dark1 [2014-04-07 22:37:27 +0000 UTC]

I'd hate to get hit by amy's piko poko hammer

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Dr-InSean [2013-12-18 04:29:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm a terribly-slow reader, so I'll have to read your story another time.  For the here and now, however, I really like this concept.  The camera angle greatly showcases Mephiles' fear and Amy's presence is strong even wtihout her actually in the scene!  Very nice.

Thank you for letting us feature this in our gallery at #S-S-S-S-S-Squad !

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shadamylove9 [2013-03-25 01:01:37 +0000 UTC]

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Mephiles-Dark-Reaper [2013-02-20 23:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Aw poor Mephi I hate Amy

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SuntheKitten [2012-09-27 05:51:22 +0000 UTC]

ugh amy piko hammer scares me

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metallicalover29 [2012-08-15 02:14:32 +0000 UTC]

run Mephiles RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!

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SCOURGE-fangirl [2012-08-06 15:29:43 +0000 UTC]

Mephiles:*in mind* holy shizzzzzz!!
Jk he looks sad and soo huggable

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Elegend-Valkyrie [2012-07-01 21:20:33 +0000 UTC]

How come all I can think of at the moment is Piko Utatane...

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Thunderjix [2012-06-26 01:46:58 +0000 UTC]

aww he looks so soft

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DJSALTINE [2012-06-25 23:01:18 +0000 UTC]

Ease away from the gonads, will ya!

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ginathefox [2012-06-21 12:56:20 +0000 UTC]

ol Amy is funnie

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JohnnyHedgehog1992 [2012-06-21 11:17:37 +0000 UTC]

No... I think the most terrifying sound is "SPLAT!" XD

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Kahunaangelica [2012-06-21 05:19:20 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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ShidesuHejjihoggu [2012-06-21 03:48:32 +0000 UTC]

Amy is the only character to ever scare me..aside from Rosy the Rascal, her Anti-verse counterpart from the Archie comics. That chick is super scary.

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Starprincess13 [2012-06-21 03:19:55 +0000 UTC]

Ooooooh, where do I even begin!?

The thick outlines are a good place to start, I guess. I'm glad to see you keep using them. They look so sharp and crisp.

The way you indicate his fur is on end via the zigzag pattern here and there is also lovely. Especially on the quills. That in particular turned out perfect; in fact, it was the very first thing I noticed.

The eyes are the perfect blends of greens, and I love how they're brighter closer to the pupils. One of the reasons I love your Mephiles pictures is all the different things you play with when doing his eyes.

I also like how you positioned his ears and tail. I can't ever get ears and tails to suggest nervousness or fear without it looking weird.

I love how Amy's hammer has the blurred edges to make it look like it's just touching down. And I like the dust that produced, too! And, also, the way you used different shades of pink for the PIKO! text.

As for the excerpt... that was hilarious. Mephiles, congrats, you have met possibly the only person crazier than you. Hell hath no fury like a teenage girl who thinks you might hurt her "boyfriend."

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RaeLogan In reply to Starprincess13 [2012-06-21 03:39:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

It's fun to make him look a little frazzled. It's just a bummer his model in the game never got to be in fully rendered style... because that fuffy chest would have been so bomb. XD

His eyes are so fun to do too.

That hammer took the longest, because I never tried doing it before. I'm glad to hear that it looks great

I had fun doing that whole chapter, because he managed to do OOC stuff while staying strangely IN Character. XD

Such as taking a moment to sit by the water, take his shoes off, stick his feet in to see what if felt like... and proceed to stomp his reflection in the water because it looks too much like Shadow, and he's taking a moment to indulge on the chance to stomp something very Shadow-like... considering he just got his butt handed to him by Shadow and Omega the previous chapter.

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I can't help but notice that I end up having him take off his shoes and gloves often... XD

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Starprincess13 In reply to RaeLogan [2012-06-22 04:20:47 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

It would have been. Fluffy characters are so cute!

And it shows every time you draw them. ^^

Isn't it just great when something actually turns out how it should?

The talented writer can write moments that seem a bit OOC while still staying in character. Netraptor does that often and so do other authors I read.

Your subconscious is either trying to tell you something... or it's just coincidence.

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ZashaChan [2012-06-21 03:01:06 +0000 UTC]

Amys hammer does make a terrifying noise i agree with mephy

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