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Published: 2006-09-20 03:05:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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daveainley [2006-10-24 08:07:08 +0000 UTC]

I almost like this, but it doesn't quite work for several reasons. 1) The periwinkle of her eyes (are you impressed at my knowledge of colors?) is not quite realistic looking. 2) It seems like the focus is off just the TEENIEST amount, which is slightly obnoxious, 3) Her hair is pushed back, and it takes away the feminine aspects of the photo, and 4) I want to be blown away by her beauty (which is what it seems is intended here), but I'm honestly kinda scared. She looks a bit creepy. Sorry.

Other than that, I love the lighting. Its simple, yet very well lit.

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raenbow In reply to daveainley [2006-10-24 13:37:07 +0000 UTC]

yay for feed back
1) I don't know what I was thinking really with the colour of her eyes, its just one of those moments I just thought f*%k it and pressed save... hrmm and yes quite impressed with ur colour knowledge

2) If you hadn't have noticed that this image was soft i would have been disappointed, because your right it is a bit, its difficult to focus through glass.... and not at all was that obnoxious!!

3)mmm her hair wasnt pushed back intentionally, i think it's more the angle of her hair and the shadow covering her hair that did that.

4)the intention wasn't quite her beauty - although I think she's stunning, the image was more to get a reaction from you the viewer either way... scared is ok.. fear is the basis of all emotion apparently.. i learnt that today hehe

but love teh feed back

and if only you knew how simple that lighting was

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daveainley In reply to raenbow [2006-10-24 21:32:14 +0000 UTC]

I do what I can, when I can. Glad my criticism wasn't taken too hard.

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lightandshadow [2006-09-20 03:32:36 +0000 UTC]

wonderful!

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raenbow In reply to lightandshadow [2006-09-20 04:57:13 +0000 UTC]

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