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Rafafa — Redesign - 2
Published: 2010-09-02 21:14:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 2667; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 60
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's FJ-2010 redesign, original here [link]Main changes where on her "clothing" and hair, made it longer, gave her toesless thighhigh stockings and elbow gloves, and gave her smaller torso clothing. To make things short, I added (or took out) to her what I think it's hot.
She is standing like a bailarina or something.
Enjoy!
More info about her on the original.
Art and redesign by me
FJ-2010 (c) to
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Thanks!
And I think it's the boobs, small boobs are cute. :'P
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She looks just a little like Miku Hatsune. Very nice.
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EXCEPT MADE FOR SEX.
AND FIGHTING.
AND SEX.
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cool redesign.
maybe this will give me some inspiration to finish my cyborg chick? iv being rather lazy with everything im drawing or doodling lately and just have been putting my recent works in the "fails folder"...yeah just cant seem to draw anything good enough to post right now but since seeing this kinda makes me wanna finish one of my works^^ so lets hope i get drawing again.
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Thanks! I was quite happy with how this one came out, even happier that I had the right color of pencil for her hair lol!
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Yeah well it turned out real nice.
I hope i can make my cyborg girl look good, right now i think im over doing it on her breasts and hips, its not really my kinda style so i might retry again with a more my kinda style or just start over and try again later if i cant get it to look right.
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OH HELLO THERE HONEY!!!!
Damn nice proportions. Sexy!!
MUCH better than the linked image.
Be careful however. The way, Im assuming, the clothes add volume to the respective limbs seems to be running the risk of hurting the shape of her limbs. A small issue.
A vast improvement. And this time she has some personality.
Love the sex appeal of the outfit. HHAAWWWTTTT-TAH!!!!!
Curve of her left breast is off as opposed to the curve of the right breast. Just needed a tiny bit of fixing. The armpit curve and the curve of the breast meeting the armpit forms an "S" shape. Even in smaller breasted women. Only the curve in them is not as pronounced. But in larger breasted girls it has more definition
Toes are well done. So often people don't like to draw those little digits. This actually makes them even cuter. You got that done beautifully. Its hard to draw feet let alone cute feet. Very good.
The hands are WELL DONE. GREAT WORK THERE. Again you succeed well in an area alot of people struggle. BRAVO!!!
Face is beautiful. So cute and sexy. And the expression is lovely.
Shape of the hair is great.
Also, with regard to her buttocks in view. Based on how I'm understanding the body angle, she has fairly wide hips (woohoo ^_^) so her left thigh would cover up the rear view abit so you would not see the left buttocks cheek or at the very least a smaller amount would protrude.
Also the hairline is too low. Implies she has only a forehead and no top to her head. Simply bringing the paths' sides closer together and bringing the path lower would solve this.
Don't be shy with those pencil crayons (colour pencils) either. I can see you have some basic shading there. Focus and define em abit more. Will do LOADS to enhance the mood, pose and personality to a pic.
This girl is just KNOCKOUT hot. (for a robot heheh)
This pic is just insane. You definitely showing great potential and promise.
Keep up the great work.
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Thanks you for the constructive criticism, I will make sure to keep in mind everything you pointed out!
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Good. Keep up the great work.
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Yes. The style is very appealing. Nice understanding of anatomy too. Love it!
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Damn man! Love the style man! Very well done!
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