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rah-t — Shattered Peaks: Chapter 1

Published: 2019-01-21 01:38:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1003; Favourites: 234; Downloads: 0
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The climb was steep, and Taro wasn't sure if his head felt heavy becuase of the damp green air, or how high the path went. Greenery flashed by him as he ran, urgency like a drum, dictating his legs move faster, faster. During the ran, he focused not on what he could see, for everything flashed by so quick and if he were to look closer he would have to admit that indeed the bushes and fern moved aside to clear the old path for him, and question the reason behind that strangeness. Instead, Taro focused on the sounds, wet squelching from the moss he trampled. It was quiet and each step was harder to hear than the previosu one, so straining to catch every sound was distraction enough from the uneasiness at the unatural behavior of the forest. Rigth as he was about to entertain the thought of giving up, a new sound came. Quiet and high pitched, pitifully weak in the dense woods. His run slowed to a walk by itself, and he didn't question that either. The trees parted as he slowly moved towards the sound. Now he could make it out a bit clearer, though it seemed weaker still. And then Taro stopped entirely. In front of his stretched what was possibly the tallest tree he had ever seen. Birds rustled its leaves and vines hung still from it's branches and at its roots stood the source fo the sound. Taro aproached it, unsure what to make of it. It was a thing of stone, touched by something, altered, but Taro could not tell how. And at the middle of it there was a different stone, round and polished and broken in two pieces. Taro stuck his muzzle in the opening to get a better feel of the shiny stone, when he heard the sound again. Words. Taro knew words, or the concept of them, but he could not piece together a meaning of what he heard. He heard things that almost sparked somethiing in him for a moment and just as quickly turned incomprehensible again. But he understood the intent, he could recognise the pleading tone like one would recognise a song from their childhood. He stood contemplating that for a while, for he knew neither what exactly a song was like, nor what childhood was. Words swam around in his head and he had almost forgotten where he was, until the voice grew in volume, high pitched and desperate, and Taro understood. "Fix me" it said. Again and again and again, a whispered scream that echoed in his already aching head. He shook, his skin was crawling. The voice took to begging now and Taro felt the urge to comply. I can fix that, I can do anything, said a voice he recognised in his mind. But the voice didn't belong to him. It belonged to Taro who's nae had been given by others, not to Taro who had taken the name himself becuase there was nothign else. Taro of blurry visions, whose skin touched cotton and could sip a soup will have knelt there and fixed it. Taro of older days would have fixed anything, a small stone was so easy. But the Taro of this day, Taro who could neither feel things under his feet neither the breeze on his shoudlers and had to pretend he does, to drag from the depths of his soul the memory of these things in order not to loose his mind, this Taro could not do it. He couldn't fix his own forest, his own tiny creak most days, how in the world would he ever be able to fix something he didn't know, something that spoke, something that wasn't a plant or a creature with breath. No, Taro would ruin it if he touched it. THis wasn't hsi forest. This was strange, and wrong, and only now did he notice the rotten bark around the strange rock and he felt sick. Not really sick, but he remembered feeling sick well enough to be able to connect it to how his soul and mind were wriggling and protesting. He turned his head, thought about how he didn't remember what tears were as the rock continued to beg and whisper to him in a voice he wishes he didn't recognise, he sent an apology and he walked away, a bit defeated. And a bit lighter too, as if all was right again. The forest air didn't feel as dense now.




excuse the typos and any mistakes, I wrote this at 3am.

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Did I just make two sceneries in on eday yes I did. And now I think my drawing brain is broken. But alas, it was worth it.



For chapter one of shattered peaks, Taro decides to not to fix or harm the shrine token.

I felt that was right for him where he's at in his life right now.




Esk featured is

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AP BREAKDOWN:


for painting:
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+5 AP (Event Biomw Bonus)

+15 AP (Quest Prompt Bonus)

Total AP per submission: 50


for writting:
Base Score: 15 AP (Writing: 753 words)
Total AP per submission: 15


TOTAL AP: 65


GP BREAKDOWN:

For painting:
Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
+2 GP (Event Biome Bonus)

+8GP (Quest prompt Bonus)

Total GP per submission: 22

for writting:
Base Score: 7 GP (Writing: 753 words)
Total GP per submission: 7



TOTAL GP: 29


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Comments: 37

taking-ctrl [2019-01-22 00:31:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm crying rah-t, first off this is beautiful. I really love seeing your backgrounds and have admiration for how you do foliage.

The writing that you put along with Taro is really impactful and I always enjoy reading it. I like why he chose not to fix it and how you described how he felt. ;^;
OTL Taro is one of my favorite esk and I'm dying to learn more about him. 

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rah-t In reply to taking-ctrl [2019-01-26 00:48:27 +0000 UTC]

thank you so so much! hh

I've never put so much love and thought into a da-based character before, and I'm so worried about my writting, it means so much to me when people like it. thank you <3


Taro is my top favourite. Like, he's there and I'm next to him holding a "proud mom" sign. I'm dying to explore more of him too.

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taking-ctrl In reply to rah-t [2019-01-27 13:01:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh man you shouldn't be!! I love reading your writting. It's always so well thought out with beautiful imagery! <3 <3 <3

Omg you need a sweater now that says that XD

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rah-t In reply to taking-ctrl [2019-01-27 14:24:39 +0000 UTC]




Yes I do need one of those....

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Kiire [2019-01-21 22:33:32 +0000 UTC]

This picture is just stunning! The way you did the tree is probably my favorite part of the whole piece. All of the soft, painty textures on it are just so easy on the eyes without sacrificing that tree bark texture! The way that Taro pops off of the greens of the background is just gorgeous, too.  

I also really like the literature that goes along with this price! It's really helpful to see just how Taro thought and felt about the situation. ;___; I feel bad for the poor guy! I think he made the right choice.  

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rah-t In reply to Kiire [2019-01-26 00:43:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

Honestly the only thing I enjoyed drawing out of all this was the tree bark XD the only thing that wasn't pure torture.


I'm so glad it feels like a fitting choice!
when I was reading the chapter info I immediately knew there was no way he would have fixed it. He's too all over the place himself to fix stuff at this point in his esk-life.



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Anastasiy [2019-01-21 20:19:07 +0000 UTC]

Supercool, I like your works!!

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rah-t In reply to Anastasiy [2019-01-26 00:34:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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supernat21 [2019-01-21 18:45:31 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful keep up the good work

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rah-t In reply to supernat21 [2019-01-26 00:34:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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rootyful [2019-01-21 17:53:07 +0000 UTC]

This is gorgeous <3

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rah-t In reply to rootyful [2019-01-21 22:52:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Kyouken0w0 [2019-01-21 17:31:39 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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rah-t In reply to Kyouken0w0 [2019-01-21 17:46:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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gigireddit [2019-01-21 15:38:39 +0000 UTC]

love this!

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rah-t In reply to gigireddit [2019-01-21 17:47:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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NotWithoutHonor [2019-01-21 13:39:17 +0000 UTC]

Well done, with the picture and the story.

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rah-t In reply to NotWithoutHonor [2019-01-21 13:54:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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norree [2019-01-21 09:39:02 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is beautiful!

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rah-t In reply to norree [2019-01-21 13:55:42 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!

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Drado27 [2019-01-21 09:37:46 +0000 UTC]

It seems like you were using just one brush to create nature which is interesting to me. Awesome work!!

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rah-t In reply to Drado27 [2019-01-21 13:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

Actually at first I used the soft/hard round brush and some random textured ones to block everything out, then went over almost the whole thing with one rough painting brush.

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Drado27 In reply to rah-t [2019-01-21 14:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the info! 😊

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rah-t In reply to Drado27 [2019-01-21 21:10:56 +0000 UTC]

no problem!

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pandelirious [2019-01-21 01:45:04 +0000 UTC]

;-;

Your esk arts.... well.. ALL your arts!!! But these esk arts?!?!? 
 

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rah-t In reply to pandelirious [2019-01-21 02:00:33 +0000 UTC]

hhhhhn thank you so much


 


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tayleaf [2019-01-21 01:43:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm loving these so much!!! I don't know if you're in the discord or not so I've been sharing them there too, everyone loves them so much ;u; 

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rah-t In reply to tayleaf [2019-01-21 01:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! omg no, I'm not on discord but I really should start using it.

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tayleaf In reply to rah-t [2019-01-21 02:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Ahh no problem!! OOO yes you should definitely pop in and check it out, its a great place, lots of fun stuff happens in there hahha I'm Taylu on there if you peek in! 

Yeah i showed this one and people were like "Dies at the beauty" , "why is it so gorgeous" haha 

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rah-t In reply to tayleaf [2019-01-26 00:27:51 +0000 UTC]

I made one, I'm Raht over there too!

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tayleaf In reply to rah-t [2019-01-26 00:55:31 +0000 UTC]

Ah nice! I have to know the number on the end too to find you, but if you're in the discord i'll say hi!

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rah-t In reply to tayleaf [2019-01-26 14:02:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh it's #6113

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tayleaf In reply to rah-t [2019-01-26 15:19:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah i see your name in the server! I said hi yesterday but i think you didnt see it. XD

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rah-t In reply to tayleaf [2019-01-26 16:34:12 +0000 UTC]

I completely forgot about discord after making it, I only went back on there a few hours ago XD I saw it and said hi, but I didn't know how to tag, sorry about that ;_;

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tayleaf In reply to rah-t [2019-01-26 16:56:58 +0000 UTC]

It's ok!!

You just type @ and then start writing the name :3

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rah-t In reply to tayleaf [2019-01-27 14:47:56 +0000 UTC]

AA thank you! that was simple XD


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tayleaf In reply to rah-t [2019-01-27 15:37:24 +0000 UTC]

np! 

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