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Rahmakapala — An offer she did refuse

Published: 2013-03-21 17:17:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 5218; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 8
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Description Another fanart piece for Ayezur's wondefull Rurouni Kenshin fanfiction story "Invictus". Invictus is an AU story, where the bakumatsu never happened and chattel slavery is practised. The Kanryuu family is profiting from new advances in how to condition the slaves, and they back the Tokugawa rule. In mids all this, Kaoru finds an abandonded slave, and decides to help him. The fanfiction can be found in ff.net: [link]

This particular picture portrays the scene in chapter 5, where our heroic trio is back from their exhausting journey to the market. On their way home Kaoru is a bit shaken up by the events and wants to take a break. However, while they are resting Kihei Hiruma happens to the scene, intruduces himself and makes an offer to buy Kenshin from Kaoru:

"Absolutely not," she bit out. "Kenshin is not for sale."

"I must ask you to reconsider," Kihei said, wringing his hands with a look of cloying concern. "Whoever sold him to you must not have been clear – he's rather badly damaged, far too much so for someone as young and inexperienced as yourself. Really, he's only of any interest to collectors; he's nearly useless for normal duties. But I'm more than willing to pay whatever his purchase price was, and a little extra for your trouble. Say, half again the original price?"

"I didn't pay anything," she said. Her hand came down to rest on the top of Kenshin's head, gently possessive. Yahiko frowned and looked a little closer. Kenshin was gripping her skirt with one hand, hidden from view by the fall of his sleeve and Kaoru's legs. His knuckles were white.

"Kenshin was abandoned," Kaoru continued, icily enough to give Megumi a run for her money. "I found him and held him for three days, as the law requires. His former owner did not seek to re-establish his claim, so I took title. He is mine, and he is not for sale. At any price."

It was a powerfull scene and it was particularly eye catching for fanart piece because I wanted to do my take on Kaoru. Kaoru's characterization in Invictus is just so real. She is fast coming up to be one of my all time favourite fanfiction characterizations.

All in all, this picture was really challenging for me to work on. I tore up my hair in sheer frustration - especiallly with the background. Also, I am not very accustomed to drawing humans - and a picture featuring 4 people all with different poses.. well it was hard. Yahiko's, Kaoru's and Kenshin's faces had a Ruroken live action movie reference that I adapted to suit the original character design better. Also I used base pictures for poses. Kihei Hiruma is modeled after screen shot taken from Ruroken manga chapter 1. However, the angle and perspective is all my work which explains all the mistakes that there might be. However, I think he is fairly recognizable character still.

I am particularly proud of my kimono pattern design for Kaoru, which was modeled after a pattern in one of Kaoru's manga appearances. (Ruroken manga chapter 1). Kenshin's clothing's color theme is something else that I really like. At the moment he is wearing Kaoru's dad's old formal wear - which restricted my choises to pick colours. I wanted to use something earthy, formal, old... and something that still fit him. I think I succeeded. The colours are bit boring - but that was the intention. However, they don't clash and they still make him look good.

Kamiya family crest that is on Kenshin's shoulders and gauntlets was based on real japanese family crest that I adapted. Also Kihei Hiruma's kimono pattern is adapted pattern that I used. Also the kanji on miso bucket is result from googling that I adapted to fit. Also the wood textures are from oak pattern that I adapted. Rest of the picture is born from my warped imagination. I had particular troubles with the background. However, when I realized that I actually get ridiculously happy by adding pointless details.. well. Then my mood started to work again. And I added a lot of pointless details.

To those who are interested in the creation process and the journey the picture went through, I posted 2 blog post featuring the WIP progress with approriate edits and updates.
Link to the part 1: [link]
Link to the part 2: [link]

Again thank you Ayezur for being an inspiration and also being a wonderful critic to help me get past the pitfalls and adjust the picture to fit her view of the scene as an illustration.
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Comments: 12

ameyukikaze [2013-11-13 18:12:16 +0000 UTC]

Nice one. Kihei and Gohei were such jerks.

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Rahmakapala In reply to ameyukikaze [2013-11-13 19:08:16 +0000 UTC]

True, true. Thanks for the comment!

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broomclosetkink [2013-07-24 16:05:05 +0000 UTC]

I just want to reach in here and smack Gohei so hard he chokes on his own teeth, the big ole jerk. I love Kaoru's balled up hand, I think that speaks well to how angry she is. 

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Rahmakapala In reply to broomclosetkink [2013-07-24 16:29:12 +0000 UTC]

Heh! Thanks! I particularly like the expressions here, because sadly I had a lot of issues with anatomy at this stage of my drawing expedition. But yeah, the balled up hand just screams anger, doesn't it? I think that's actually straight from the text. So, truly... all the awe to Ayezur and her wonderful descriptions.

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TrueImmortality [2013-04-17 02:56:34 +0000 UTC]

I love this fanfiction and am so thrilled by this fanart!

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Rahmakapala In reply to TrueImmortality [2013-04-17 05:31:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad that you like it! I too like Kaoru's defiance in this picture. And Kenshin has such a gorgeous face here. *swoons* I am particularly glad of those two things. Thank you for the comment and kind words!

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TrueImmortality In reply to Rahmakapala [2013-04-18 02:16:03 +0000 UTC]

I like Kenshin's face pretty much all the time...XD But you did it justice here, certainly.

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Rahmakapala In reply to TrueImmortality [2013-04-18 09:41:03 +0000 UTC]

Well, I am trying to learn to draw humans.. so faces and hands are in particular very difficult for me. However, I have hope that I will get better. SOmeday. *grin*

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TrueImmortality In reply to Rahmakapala [2013-04-19 01:06:20 +0000 UTC]

Keep it up!

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red-winged-angel [2013-03-21 18:39:11 +0000 UTC]

It was nice to see you in progress of this. It turned out well. The only suggestion I would make next time is to enlarge their hands a bit more. The hand, when fully open, is about the size of one's face; in a fist, it's about half that much. Other than that, beautiful job with all the minute detail and background.

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Rahmakapala In reply to red-winged-angel [2013-03-21 19:06:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for that observation. I have actually come to realize that I have a tendency to make the hands a tad bit too small. It's a bad habit. But, maybe I will manage to catch myself earlier on next piece. Thank you for the comment!

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red-winged-angel In reply to Rahmakapala [2013-03-21 19:19:32 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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