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Published: 2017-01-14 23:24:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 594; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 0
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Firstly, new sona! I felt that the old version didn't fit me as much so this is the new hoshi, it looks a lot more like me. I'll still keep hoshi and I might switch between the two but idk yet I really like the new one.
This is a vent but I'm not sad about anything? I just have trouble breathing and I tend to almost choke on my food A LOT of the time? I also have a fear of swimming in open water and drowning (because I couldn't swim for a long time and I almost did drown one time, well I did but I'm alive?)
I'm also so proud of this? Backgrounds and effects add so much to a drawing. I chose not to put my watermark on this one because I felt as if it'd be ruined if I did? I meant for this to be as sad as it is elegant but I guess it turned out more sad. I WAS GOING TO DO A PROCESS OF THIS BUT I CLOSED IT ACCIDENTALLY. I really need to do commissions but I want to put out one video for someone before that.
My dog is laying by my laptop and he is coot as frik.
Okay I love you guys so much! byeee.
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Oh my god, that girl is drowning! OAO OAO OAO I like how correct the anatomy is overall and the beautiful background of the ocean! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Here is a list of things you can improve on:
- In my opinion, the fact that the belly button completely looks unappealing to me because usually shading in real life isn't that dark.
- The way the hand touching the chin is positioned makes it look like she's rubbing her chin and thinking deeply rather than hopeless attempting to hold her breath.
It's quite how you desaturated the character's colors. Is there a reason for this? Anyways, I hope this helps! ^_^
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This is really impressive. There's a lot of emotion in your drawing. The sense of drowning, choking, helplessness. To make your drawing more dramatic, you could consider using darker colors in combination with the dramatic light beams. It will definitely make it more sad, but also more emotional - don't worry, it still can be very elegant.
So, more contrast in the light. There's already a lot of contrast in foreground and background, because of the colors. This is pretty to look at, but it does little to enhance the idea of drowning. I think that adding some blue-ish hue to the woman would help to give the idea that she is underwater.
I think it's a pity you cut of the feet and the right hand. This makes the image look "cropped". I'd suggest to add some space at both top and bottom, so it'll be a full body drawing OR maybe even consider a very close framing (that might be more interesting than a wide shot, since little open space in your drawing can add to the idea of suffocating. )
Eh, well, the things I mentioned aren't necessarily "better". It's just some things you can keep in mind for your next drawing. Your work is very beautiful and emotional, and you should definitely be proud of it!
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Forgot to mention that I'm here via ProjectComment
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Thank you ;u; I'm glad that you think so
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The chops chops in the stream made me see like 5 seconds of this piece, but now it finished! Ya skrub
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i really really like this holy cow chicken nubs this is amazing
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