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RainThatFall — 1. Introduction
Published: 2012-05-29 02:59:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description I absently scroll down, searching the internet and clicking on links.

Boring, boring, boring, boring…

Hmm…

That looks interesting.

I click it and it comes up,

"100 Themes Challenge!"

"Loon!"

I swivel in my chair to find my younger sister in her disheveled pajamas, her long, bed-headed light brown hair sticking everywhere.

Her arms hug her precious teddy bear tightly to her small frame.

Her bottom lip quivers and her eyes are filled with tears.

"Loon!"

"Carmen, what's wrong?"

I hurry to her side and place my hands on her shoulders, kneeling down to take a good look at her.

"Wendy's not feewing well!"

Inwardly, I relax, but I gasp aloud.

"Oh dear! Shall we get her some medicine?"

Her eyes light up and she smiles.

"Weally?"

I smile back and tap her nose in a scolding manner.

"If Wendy's not feeling well, then don't you think we should get her back into tip-top shape?"

"You're wight!"

She squeals happily, jumping up and down. I shush her.

"Quickly, we've gotta put her back to bed if she's going to get better. Go on ahead, I'll be there with the medicine."

Her face immediately goes serious, and she nods sharply, running out of the room.

I chuckle and return to the computer, opening up a Word Document.

"I absently scroll down, searching the internet and clicking on links…"
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Comments: 4

tynewatson [2012-06-01 13:24:43 +0000 UTC]

Lol like it Similar to what I did for mine! Hahaha

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RainThatFall In reply to tynewatson [2012-06-01 19:19:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm pretty sure I didn't copy you, and if I did, then I did it unconsciously. If I'd known beforehand that you'd did it, then it probably would've worked out differently, but I was just messing around

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tynewatson In reply to RainThatFall [2012-06-03 14:11:23 +0000 UTC]

Lol wasn't saying copying, just the start mimics at the end like mine, but it's a common writing technique I beleive. I really like your writing style. how you're doing the 100 themes but doing all the same characters and style, you've got guts I can tell ya! lol

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deerrose6 [2012-06-01 00:54:32 +0000 UTC]

OH this is what happened when you were writeing or at least it is in the story XD clever

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