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Battle between Demons“Just because you’re FULLY demon does not mean I am inferior to you!” Rayne yelled as her golden brown eyes started to shift between the natural colour and silver.
“I never said you were inferior!” Riku yelled back as he started to grow fangs.
Demonic wings tarred out the back of Rayne’s shirt “you sure sounded like it!”
That was it. Riku growled and glided towards Rayne. Rayne stood her ground and waited for her attack. Just as Riku launched his punch, Rayne jumped up and out of the way, of Riku’s bone-shattering punch. Rayne glided towards Riku and threw punches and kicks and never gave up, no matter how many times Riku blocked them.
Riku snickered as Rayne made a grave mistake, she turned her back to him and used her razor sharp wings to try and inflict damage on Riku’s body. Riku smirked and grabbed Rayne’s wings and crushed them as the bones in her wings began to break.
“GAH!” Rayne yelled as she felt blood trickle down her now broken wings Rayne began to fall to the floor and even though her wings were broken she tried to flap them, get them to work…but they were too drenched to move…
Riku, laughed at the fallen Rayne…what he didn’t know…was that she also had angelic wings…
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Comments: 47
shadowsgurl [2006-02-19 13:59:27 +0000 UTC]
Meh: ZOMG!! Riku your in big trouble
Riku: ?...
Meh: you praticly killed her!
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Raiven2k5 In reply to shadowsgurl [2006-02-19 14:16:38 +0000 UTC]
Me: Well..he only broke her wings so far ¬¬
Rayne: (shakes blood covered wings) grrr....blood is harder to wash than i thought....
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shadowsgurl In reply to Raiven2k5 [2006-02-19 15:39:56 +0000 UTC]
Meh: thank god it isnt something really serious
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shadowsgurl In reply to Raiven2k5 [2006-02-19 15:41:49 +0000 UTC]
Meh: but he is stil in trouble, need any help Rayne?
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Raiven2k5 In reply to shadowsgurl [2006-02-19 15:42:51 +0000 UTC]
Rayne: nope...(looks at wings that have been soaked in a river, forces angelic wings out instead) ^^
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Raiven2k5 In reply to shadowsgurl [2006-02-19 15:45:39 +0000 UTC]
Me : Shade=Angelic wings Leoemonic wings...so rayne gets both ¬¬'
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shadowsgurl In reply to Raiven2k5 [2006-02-19 15:46:09 +0000 UTC]
Meh: kewl..so Leo is part demon..and is becoming a demon slayer? that is weird..
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Raiven2k5 In reply to shadowsgurl [2006-02-19 15:46:57 +0000 UTC]
Leo: Lets just say...im a demon gone good X3
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shadowsgurl In reply to Raiven2k5 [2006-02-19 15:47:19 +0000 UTC]
Meh: ok then..if you say so..
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shadowsgurl In reply to Raiven2k5 [2006-02-19 16:05:31 +0000 UTC]
Meh: : blah blah : is how ya do it! but on it..i would change the 'you' to 'i' XD
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shadowsgurl In reply to Raiven2k5 [2006-02-19 16:17:18 +0000 UTC]
Meh: I EAT N00BS! *eats n00b*
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Raiven2k5 In reply to shadowsgurl [2006-02-19 16:18:18 +0000 UTC]
Me: O.O (eats evil pointy things)
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shadowsgurl In reply to Raiven2k5 [2006-02-19 16:19:11 +0000 UTC]
Meh: gah! that one went down the wrong pipe!! *chokes*
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sora3215 [2006-02-19 00:16:33 +0000 UTC]
Nya can't wait for more!!! ^^ Great, excellent work so far!!
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Raiven2k5 In reply to sora3215 [2006-02-19 10:07:05 +0000 UTC]
thanks! left a little suspence in it X3
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kevinchen21 [2006-02-18 23:44:41 +0000 UTC]
o.O/// pretty and descriptive. But... I didn't reaaly get it! GAH!!! T3H CONFUSION!!! How come I have this feeling that this was like some inside thing? Well, anyways. I really liked the descriptions they were really imager-etic.. ya know? Also, I thought that this was realyl brief, and YES, I DO know that this is only part one of something, but still... ya know? It's still kind of short... but then again, you wouldn't want to have something as long as the thing that i have... lol, MUCH TOO LONG, mine. If you ever find the time to read it, you'll know hwat i mean. lol. pretty nice, man. Keep it up!
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Raiven2k5 In reply to kevinchen21 [2006-02-18 23:46:03 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^^ i'll make it longer in part 2
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