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Rajal — Antione Part 2

Published: 2010-02-19 22:31:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 329; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 6
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Description Antoine, Male


Antoine doesn’t look for trouble, it has a bad habit of finding him. This is likely due to the fact that he’s blind in one eye and therefore appears to be at a disadvantage if he gets in a fight, not to say that he can’t hold his own. He can. Vision seems rather trivial when your hearing is heightened to the point that you can hear the paw steps of an approaching rouge half a mile a way.
He is a bit eccentric, he wanders off at inappropriate times and has somewhat obsessively compulsive tendencies: Counting his paw steps, circling counter-clockwise before he sits, leading with his left paw when he crosses rivers. This translates to being socially awkward, especially around females. It’s as if he doesn’t even recognize them as the same species.
Still waters may run deep, but if that applies to him, you wouldn’t know. He hasn’t spoken much since the incident, it may be due to the guilt that he walked away with only scars while his sister never got up. I heard she was beautiful, and that he laughed when she smiled. She was the only one who got his condition. Without her and with his disability he seems to have slipped beyond redemption. He hasn’t laughed since, but he smiles occasionally, when he plays with the pups.
Adults avoid him since he has a rather ominous air about him, and naturally, they make him quite anxious. We all fear what is different or that we do not understand. The pups however seem oblivious to such societal norms and tired misconceptions. They adore him, and he seems to accept them more than the adults do. I suppose he sees the young as innocent, or maybe he just longs for the days he and his sister romped around the den.

I'm not a comic artist, but I thought I would make a guenuine effort for this.

I'll type up a description when I have a chance, but first I have to update Antoine's Bio!

PLEASE comment and tell me what you think of the images, or angles or what you think the story is or whatever!

I love you guys!

Design by *akreon
Image by ~Rajal
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Comments: 16

drunkdrawings [2010-02-23 23:19:39 +0000 UTC]

I REALLY hope you get this! This is comic is great and I like how all the puppies are just sleeping on and around him! Nicely done!

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DragonBile [2010-02-21 19:23:47 +0000 UTC]

you put it up.

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Rajal In reply to DragonBile [2010-02-21 22:26:05 +0000 UTC]

Yep! It finally loaded XD

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shadevampyr [2010-02-20 06:49:46 +0000 UTC]

omg les puppies reminds me of lira & bali!

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Rajal In reply to shadevampyr [2010-02-21 02:18:18 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
<3

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shadevampyr In reply to Rajal [2010-02-21 05:13:35 +0000 UTC]

<3!

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Dreamcatcher-Laura [2010-02-20 00:04:52 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh my eyes! The puppies are just too cute.

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Rajal In reply to Dreamcatcher-Laura [2010-02-21 02:18:28 +0000 UTC]

It burns, does it not?

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TromboneGrll [2010-02-19 23:38:29 +0000 UTC]

you can do comics, too?
you're too amazing!

I would type more about how I love this, but penny decided to randomly climb into my lap so it's super hard to type >.<

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Rajal In reply to TromboneGrll [2010-02-21 02:19:04 +0000 UTC]

No, Member the comic project last year? I sucked at it!

Awww, thank you, give penny kissies for me <3

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Kajm [2010-02-19 23:06:45 +0000 UTC]

The frames being slanted does not harm... in fact it can sometimes be useful to force the reader to look in a particular direction, or give the impression that something is larger than it actually is, things like that.

I think it looks pretty good! Not sure if I would suggest anything at this point.

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Rajal In reply to Kajm [2010-02-21 02:19:34 +0000 UTC]

I wish I had planed a way to slant it then!

Thank you so much! <3 <3 <3

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Kajm In reply to Rajal [2010-02-21 02:22:03 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

And keep experimenting. Not getting things quite the way you want them can be a Good thing! *g*

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Kageh [2010-02-19 22:45:23 +0000 UTC]

I think this is freaking amazing for a comic style. The frames are slanted but I'm not sure if you wanted them to be that way or not. x3

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Rajal In reply to Kageh [2010-02-19 22:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Haha, It wasn't intentional but I was aware of it, I just couldn't get it straight! Darn my messed up eye!

THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH KAGE!

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Kageh In reply to Rajal [2010-02-19 22:58:02 +0000 UTC]

I can't get my comic panles striaght either! Sooo it's ok

Your very welcome Raj <3

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