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This is page one of my doujinshi Spring Time (not counting the cover page).
Ok so this is the intro to the story, it's spring time and Koyuki is lonely (not for long ;D). I have a lot of things to say about this one but I'll try and keep it to a minimum ^^'

I feel like there is too much going on. There is the first panel all spacey with the couples (which is what I intended) but then it seems to cram up after that. I don't know -.- maybe it's just me.

Then there is Koyuki. Why are you so hard to draw?! I followed the Koyuki design from the cover page but it still doesn't satisfy me, so if by the end of the comic you see a totally different Koyuki (a better one I hope XD) then this is why. I like the panel 4 with the stalker Giroro the most because you only see Koyuki's back haha

Panel 5 is a big excuse to write down part of the story (sorry about that ) I just didn't know how to put it. And panel 7 I like how she disappears (even if it's a bit sudden <.< but aren't ninjas like that?)

And for the last panel I didn't know if should put "sometimes" or "at times" so I just went with the original fanfic.

Well anyways this is me getting all of that out of my system and now moving on to page three. I will keep trying my best so that I can give a quality doujinshi for you guys, so enjoy! :3

Leave a comment! (if you like it, tips, advice... anything helps >w<)

The Keroro Gunso characters don't belong to me

Cover: [link] Next: [link]

Description
This is page one of my doujinshi Spring Time (not counting the cover page).
Ok so this is the intro to the story, it's spring time and Koyuki is lonely (not for long ;D). I have a lot of things to say about this one but I'll try and keep it to a minimum ^^'

I feel like there is too much going on. There is the first panel all spacey with the couples (which is what I intended) but then it seems to cram up after that. I don't know -.- maybe it's just me.

Then there is Koyuki. Why are you so hard to draw?! I followed the Koyuki design from the cover page but it still doesn't satisfy me, so if by the end of the comic you see a totally different Koyuki (a better one I hope XD) then this is why. I like the panel 4 with the stalker Giroro the most because you only see Koyuki's back haha

Panel 5 is a big excuse to write down part of the story (sorry about that ) I just didn't know how to put it. And panel 7 I like how she disappears (even if it's a bit sudden <.< but aren't ninjas like that?)

And for the last panel I didn't know if should put "sometimes" or "at times" so I just went with the original fanfic.

Well anyways this is me getting all of that out of my system and now moving on to page three. I will keep trying my best so that I can give a quality doujinshi for you guys, so enjoy! :3

Leave a comment! (if you like it, tips, advice... anything helps >w<)

The Keroro Gunso characters don't belong to me

Cover: [link] Next: [link]