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Published: 2003-04-08 20:52:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 120; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description A shattered dream
so long ago
the virgin team
that could never know

The dream alive
for only a minute
they thought would strive
but found it didnt

The broken dream
no longer there
so the team
came back to here

The job they had
could not be done
the battle at hand
was never won

The wounded hearts
that cried out so loud
the fate\'s cards
made no one proud

So take the dream
remember it well
hear their screams
and hope they fell
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Comments: 2

saro-n-mizary [2003-09-01 04:47:36 +0000 UTC]

"So take the dream
remember it well
hear their screams
and hope they fell"

this is written really well
quite amazing actually

very strong words you have in here

good job

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random-error In reply to saro-n-mizary [2003-09-01 23:27:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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