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random-monkey — 3 Staged Dandelion
Published: 2004-05-16 22:35:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 96; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 14
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I'm not a fan of this compositionI like the 2 top images, but the 3rd one quite lets this down. I originally took these 3 with the intention of doing this composition though, so I put it together...
I'd appreciate some criticism though, because I know it's not perfect, and I'd like to know where to improve it...
The border could use improvement, I know that...
What would you do?
*EDIT* - Well DevArt has decided to make the 'deviation view' not work, but the fullview does work... I've tried to reupload it twice, so I give up now */EDIT*
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Comments: 4
nice pic.
i have some flower pics too
check them out
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hmm, i think that works quite well. even with the last image. only thing i can think of is some sort of photoshop manipulation to the last one to shift the focus slightly?
just a thought.
nice work though!
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Possibly, but it's a lot harder to get something /in/ focus when it's out of focus... damned near impossible actually...
I'd prefer to just go out and take another shot
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i knew using "focus" would be the wrong word. i meant to shift the subject, the attention sort of thing. the soft focus kinda helps it fit in anyway.
still like it though
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