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RandomDanger — Changing Seasons
Published: 2008-12-09 03:25:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 208; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 2
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Description You can be cold and cruel, like the winter
or calm and settled, soft as powdered snow.
Jagged snowflake, edges sting like splinters
until you melt, cold water which then flows.
You seethe, turn hot, tempered, the summer sun,
but stinging cholar quickly liquified.
Our bittersweet parting has just begun,
your bad traits, in my eyes, now magnified.
Sweet memories have a place in my heart,
whilst dark conflicts hide deep within my mind,
constant reminders of our painful part.
To all of this pain I am far from blind.
Our bond changed as mercurial seasons,
simply because of a foolish reason.
Comments: 7

Vanilla-Kirby [2009-06-15 21:05:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow. this hit me like a hard stone.

It sounds like you really put a lot of emotion into this.

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RandomDanger In reply to Vanilla-Kirby [2009-06-18 03:48:08 +0000 UTC]

why thank you (:
i am glad you enjoyed it so much

and yeah i did. surprisingly actually. i never try on school work lol

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Vanilla-Kirby In reply to RandomDanger [2009-06-18 03:54:09 +0000 UTC]

lol, ah, but poetry is a completely different story, as even within the boundaries of school work, it is also its own classification of uniqueness..

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RandomDanger In reply to Vanilla-Kirby [2009-06-19 19:12:01 +0000 UTC]

i suppose you're right! poetry can be so different sometimes...i hated having to do it for school work though. im not that creative

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mallykatt [2009-03-02 16:07:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very powerful. There is alot of feeling and emotion in this piece; you really sound hurt. I can totally relate though so this is definitely going in my faves if thats alright by you !

Keep writing, you do a great job!

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RandomDanger In reply to mallykatt [2009-03-04 22:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Thank you. Really. that means A LOT to me. I write a lot, but i am so shy to post things because im afraid people will just call it stupid typical poety stuff.
Thank you. I will try my best now that i know someone actually likes what i write lol.

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mallykatt In reply to RandomDanger [2009-03-05 12:40:13 +0000 UTC]

Don't think that way, you've gotta go for it! Keep it up!

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