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Well this is my littel literature i wanted to do  before i leave dA so yeah lets start it.





Alone ah word i hate but at the same time i live
i may deserve it but at the same time is not fair
all the hope i haved in myself is dead , is dead.....
sometimes i feel like ah piece of wood how talks and has felling`s
but maybe that`s  what  i am ah piece of wood ......
being alone is unnatural fore many how are lucky
but those with the worst luck ever like myself only wish
to have someone to talk to....
but even wishes come true for some time ...
but when it goes because of simple stupidity  it hard to admit
even if its the simplest thing its really important i hope someday
they might  forgive what  i did but i now that  what  i feel in
my heart will never change all the guilt i feel might never change
....................................................


well hope you enjoy my littel poem literature thingy i did

 



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Comments: 30

Explosivemig344 [2013-06-26 18:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Bro u are never alone,u have lots of good friends here on dA including me so dont be sad because u will never be alone as long as u have us

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randomguy233 In reply to Explosivemig344 [2013-06-27 01:17:01 +0000 UTC]

yeah explosive and ah haleluya you enter dA

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Explosivemig344 In reply to randomguy233 [2013-06-27 01:39:46 +0000 UTC]

Lol its a miracle!!! xD lol

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randomguy233 In reply to Explosivemig344 [2013-06-27 01:59:35 +0000 UTC]

yeah XD

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winterwolf227 [2013-06-20 22:41:01 +0000 UTC]

Rg your never alone don't you see that? For example no matter where you are there is someone who is always thinking about you and you'll always have people who care about you RG

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randomguy233 In reply to winterwolf227 [2013-06-20 22:45:43 +0000 UTC]

erghm winty this is only ah litterature thing i wanted to do for ah long time so yeah this is not related to my bye bye to dA but i admit it has some hint`s on why i am leaving and can you rate it plz i want ah pro to review it

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winterwolf227 In reply to randomguy233 [2013-06-20 23:08:43 +0000 UTC]

It has some errors on your spelling and a little to manny dots hmm you need to add more emotion into it and a little with your grammar but over all it's good for a start^^

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randomguy233 In reply to winterwolf227 [2013-06-20 23:12:46 +0000 UTC]

can you tell me the error`s plz and thx for reviewing it

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winterwolf227 In reply to randomguy233 [2013-06-20 23:18:59 +0000 UTC]

Well witch should be wish and the second sentence you used that word needs a little fixing is one of them^^

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randomguy233 In reply to winterwolf227 [2013-06-20 23:19:58 +0000 UTC]

oh ok thx

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winterwolf227 In reply to randomguy233 [2013-06-20 23:26:53 +0000 UTC]

No prob

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randomguy233 In reply to winterwolf227 [2013-06-20 23:31:02 +0000 UTC]

still thx

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winterwolf227 In reply to randomguy233 [2013-06-20 23:31:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeah just keep on practicing^^

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randomguy233 In reply to winterwolf227 [2013-06-20 23:35:16 +0000 UTC]

ok thx and i will most likely do ah poem for tomorrow

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winterwolf227 In reply to randomguy233 [2013-06-20 23:36:44 +0000 UTC]

Hmm well I can't wait to see it^^

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randomguy233 In reply to winterwolf227 [2013-06-20 23:40:19 +0000 UTC]

yeah and that will be most likely my last devation

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winterwolf227 In reply to randomguy233 [2013-06-21 01:36:35 +0000 UTC]

Rg =3=

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randomguy233 In reply to winterwolf227 [2013-06-21 01:38:41 +0000 UTC]

what ^^

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winterwolf227 In reply to randomguy233 [2013-06-21 01:40:40 +0000 UTC]

you better not leave >.>

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randomguy233 In reply to winterwolf227 [2013-06-21 01:44:00 +0000 UTC]

maybe maybe not only i will tell tomorrow

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winterwolf227 In reply to randomguy233 [2013-06-21 01:45:20 +0000 UTC]

=_=.....

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randomguy233 In reply to winterwolf227 [2013-06-21 01:49:23 +0000 UTC]

oh well i am gona tell u the only way that i dont leave make mid talk to me normaly again or send me ah pic off yours in bikini

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winterwolf227 In reply to randomguy233 [2013-06-21 01:57:20 +0000 UTC]

So that's the only way huh =3= your not even thinking how torn would feel?!?! (Sorry just very crabby at the moment =_= not at you but well you already know )

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randomguy233 In reply to winterwolf227 [2013-06-21 01:59:25 +0000 UTC]

yeah well those are the only two ways ^^ i recommend going the trying mid to talk to me normaly roud

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winterwolf227 In reply to randomguy233 [2013-06-21 02:00:42 +0000 UTC]

Question....aren't you thinking about your other friends at all =_=

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randomguy233 In reply to winterwolf227 [2013-06-21 02:03:05 +0000 UTC]

yes i am thinking about them expecialy jane

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winterwolf227 In reply to randomguy233 [2013-06-21 02:17:21 +0000 UTC]

I ment the ones here on dA don't you think it would hurt them to see you deactivate?

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randomguy233 In reply to winterwolf227 [2013-06-21 15:05:39 +0000 UTC]

jane is from dA winter is

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winterwolf227 In reply to randomguy233 [2013-06-21 17:48:08 +0000 UTC]

I know who she is she's my sis =3=

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randomguy233 In reply to winterwolf227 [2013-06-21 23:49:56 +0000 UTC]

ok ^^ and i am not gona leave dA yet

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