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randomjunk123 — I call it. LOVE.
Published: 2007-10-28 22:36:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 1848; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 24
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this is just something i came up with. please tell me how i could improve it.edit://
added my name ^^
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added words for a focal point
thanks to ~S0ulfire84 for suggesting it
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This is quite a good piece of work. You combined some good functions of Photoshop together.
Only nitpick I have which I think could improve it quite a lot is changing the font to an older style caligraphy font. Which fits in more with the background. Now you have this almost medeval (spelling) looking background with the swords and the Elfish text and you have this sharp text on top of it. Which could use a bit of antique-ish-ness to it.
Other then that a top piece. Great job.
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Thank you for the comment!! If I ever find the .psd version of this piece, I'll be sure to change it!! (I lose things a lot . . . even on my computer)
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Oh even if you can't find it no worries the artwork itself is quite good. But you might keep it in mind for the next artwork. Just as quality images is typography a very important part of designing.
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Thank you. I'll be sure to keep that in mind!
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I would write something in a calligraphic handwriting in the middle such as "Love" or something of that sort.
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wow!! that's an awesome idea!!!
i'm going to do just that
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Yay, awesome!
Let me know when you do.
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i made the changes. tell me if you like
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Wow amazing! Incredible how much the piece changed. It's really nice and feels complete now.
Great work! ^_^
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I love the texture of it
though it needs a focal point? (the flower seems more like decoration)
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yea. the flower isn't really a focus point. i tried to give it a focal point, but no ideas.
do you have any?
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maybe use this artwork as a texture to put over a different work? Of an old fashioned scene? I'm now sure...I'm terrible at finding focal points
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that's an interesting idea. im going to play around with that!!
lol. your not the only one. i am horrible at making focal points too. i just want to put nothing or everything
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lol. nice to meet someone else who shares my strangeness
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oh, i made some changes.
a friend suggested a focal point and i added it.
hope you like!
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nice! it'd make a good wallpaper
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This is very pretty, you should definitely make a wallpaper out of this too!
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thanks very much. i will consider that ^^
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thanks. it look like 40 layers and a bunch of hard work
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How awesome, I like the colors...
Beautiful!
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This looks cool
Although I personally don't really like the lines in the background.. maybe if you just showed the text it would be better? Dunno. Personal taste xD
Nice work though
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thanks. the lines add some interest...or do they???
i might check how it looks without the lines.
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I don't know... To me it's not that appealing... but if you like it 
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yea; your right. i think it looks nice, so im gonna leave it that way. but thanks alot for telling me what you REALLY think, not just being nice when you don't mean it.
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